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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space 
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my father only asks me how i feel so he can tell me how much worse he does my brother only listens to me rant about my father long enough to tell me how much more he's had to go through and when i try to vent to a friend on life they tell me why there's are far more complex so if I go quiet when you ask whats wrong forgive me I'm just tired of the competition bllllllaaaaaah what a piece of crap but itching to post.. |
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Soleil Noir Senior Member
since 2001-12-19
Posts 688USA |
but I KNOW this! Q: "Why don't you ever complain?" A: "Because I'm always one-upped." |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
you win |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
my father only asks me how i feel so he can tell me how much worse he does my brother only listens to me rant about my father long enough to tell me how much more he's had to go through sounds like a classic sunday family dinner, with some agita (spelling ?) for an appetizer |
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Krawdad Member Elite
since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597 |
Piece-a-crap, eh? Want a suggestion or two? You have an itch to post, I have an itch to edit. (Perhaps I merely control the postitch better than the edititch.)  Kraw' |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Not only was your poem an interesting read, but so were the replies that it elicited!  Brings to mind the line from "Crocodile Dundee" ---"You call that a knife?!?--Now, THIS is a KNIFE!!!"  Huggums, EA |
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Brad Majors 
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
I miss reading your work! |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
indeed . . . indeed |
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Deus Junior Member
since 2003-07-17
Posts 18California, US |
Interesting thought process and a nice write. |
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timothysangel1973
since 2001-12-03
Posts 1725Never close enough |
"so if I go quiet when you ask whats wrong forgive me I'm just tired of the competition" Ain't that the truth...no matter how bad we have it...someone else is always sure that they have it worse! Great write...even if it was just a way to get your name on today's list of topics...haha [This message has been edited by timothysangel1973 (07-19-2003 01:41 AM).] |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
damn, ain't that the truth? I can relate...everyone always has a "one-up" story, don't they? |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
Oh yeah? You think your poem sucks? Why you should have been around when I wrote..... *LAUGH* Sorry Sir, I just couldn't help it. You really did touch on one of the more maddening of human characteristics. Hope you feel better soon. |
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angelblueyes Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148Oklahoma |
I liked the write and the responses it brought out.Good job. angelblueyes |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Thanks Soleil lol Yeah H that's me a total winner Mish i think that's the right spelling lol yeah pretty much krawdad you can edit mine if youre inclined grins Linda and you just reminded me of a simpsons spoof of that scene Aussie:"That's no a knife THIS is a knife" Bart:"Thats not a knife it's a spoon." Aussie  embarrassed) "Oh, I see you've played knife n spoony before"ok so you had to see it..pbhlllllt Miss yours Brad where you been? Sue indeed Grins Timsangel thanks Dixie yup it's enough to make you go baseball bat shopping Ice LMAO thanks bud needed that..witty @&#*&#@! thanks angelblueeyes welcoem to PIP [This message has been edited by Aenimal (07-19-2003 03:56 AM).] |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
Everyone's got it worse than everyone else. And I only listen to hear you complain..and act insane. Off to find more..this is taking a nice chunk out of my boring day  |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Oh yah!? well, I think I could win that crap-post contest, hands down! ROTFL. |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Oh ya?!! You think you have the worst crappy post?!! I can beat all of ya! I wrote a poem so bad even I couldn't stand to read it!!!  Not even walking uphill 20 miles to school in a drving snowstorm every morning at 4 a.m. !!!! |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Do I smell a stinky poetry contest brewing? LOL Probably not for Open. [This message has been edited by Midnitesun (07-19-2003 06:04 PM).] |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Raffaele ... that's a good one and so true! Let the one without sin cast the first stone!! It's a very diffused habit ... Abbracci. Margherita  |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
Wait a minute! Shouldn't it be, "May the one who is stoned first cast the first sinner???" |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Thanks everyone lol and ice I through the last one a good 6 yards beat that..damn i got the munchies |
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