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Wonderfully Lost
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States 
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Wonderfully Lost By Larry Chadwick For my lovely wife - Nancy Lee Instantly overwhelmed by your caring, Made to me feel like yours. You know when it all began, It was the day our paths crossed. It started with those sparkling eyes, Overshadowing the winning smile. Occurring in a moment, Lasting for a life time. All of it beginning spontaneously, Built on a beautiful foundation. Grounds for being drawn in, Opportunity for character to be revealed. It is a confession I proudly declare, I have always been lost in your love. July 17, 2003 If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
a lovely write Larry. Good to see you. Hope everything went well.  M |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Larry, You read like a teenager and that's good. Enjoyed. |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
awwww, dang...this is very romantic....*sigh* you do mushy good  |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
Oh, Larry. This is absolutely beautiful. Patricia |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Can't think of any better place to get lost in!! Loved the romance Larry! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
You write beautiful words to your Nancy Lee. Wonderful romantic write here Larry! ~Hugs & Smiles, from this Nancy Lee~ ~ I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before ~ |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice...James |
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x8x_bigmike Member
since 2003-07-08
Posts 130California, USA |
some get lost in memory or nostalgia..i get lost in poetry...the way you get down to the essence of the simple thing...great Mike |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
This is beautiful, Larry. Your love for your wife is shining brightly in this piece. Hugs, ~Vicky it is better to be a part of beauty for one instant and then cease to exist than to exist forever and never be a part of beauty -- Don Marquis [This message has been edited by vlraynes (07-18-2003 05:21 PM).] |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Thank you all I am dashing out for my road trip from Phoenix to Portland, Oregon. I'll check in and give personal responses on the other end. Woohoo!!!  If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again. |
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Skyfire
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
awwww |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Larry - wow, this is a place I know well, you did good with your pen... BC |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Awwww Larry, this is a beautiful, romantic poem. And, I think it is a great way to be lost. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
A love like that will keep you both young forever!  Warm hugs and smiles, Linda |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
good stuff  |
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timothysangel1973
since 2001-12-03
Posts 1725Never close enough |
Awwww, how sweet...she's so lucky! |
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angelblueyes Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148Oklahoma |
A magnificent thing to get lost in. A very lucky lady is she. Loved this write. angelblueyes |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
All of it beginning spontaneously, Built on a beautiful foundation. Grounds for being drawn in, Opportunity for character to be revealed. It is a confession I proudly declare, I have always been lost in your love. Larry, what a beautifully romantic poem. You know that I love it!  Hugs  Ethel |
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El_Campeador Senior Member
since 2003-01-29
Posts 761Ohio, USA |
It is love like that which you have for your wife that makes this world a much better place. Lovely write, Larry. May your love endure forever. ~El Campeador “We are all travelers in the wilderness of this world, and the best that we can find in our travels is an honest friend.” –Robert Louis Stevenson |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
That's the kind of "lost" to be :-) Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
you know how to get lost in style enjoy the coastal coolness |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
larry this just made me cry! happy sad tears. |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
Larry? is that you? are you back or is this an old one? you are too much, too much |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
It may be me! Thank you all. That ten foot trailer pushed my old truck 1430 miles pretty fast. But thank you for your kindnesses.If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again. |
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