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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio 
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you sneek up on me between drops of rain, your picture framed by stars connected on a moving sky, you are shrouded still in mystery tho you graced me with your touch and bled your life onto mine, there are days i wish i could accept this contract signed by dinosaurs years ago, and not wonder why in the world you had to KISS me like that, then sleep in a desert, hours after i watched yet another sunset unsynchronized with yours, from this garden state, didn't you know you'd leave me to wander upon an eastcoast timezone, seeking your aura in a surrogate that has yet to come, i can no sooner hold on to you, than the trees to the breeze that exhilerates them on a sleepy summer day, and therein lies the key to your mystery, that on a day when the circus has left the sky, i can still, on any given moment, conjure up your smiling eyes above me, knowing that your gift is truly from the angels and probably too beauitful to break thru earth's fascade, as nothing real seems to sustain its first rush, anyhow, as i am finally left in resolution after years of frantically seeking your echo, knowing until we meet again,flesh to flesh, i can still find you between the raindrops, and feel you, when not hindered by the mundanity of weather predictions [This message has been edited by inkedgoddess (07-18-2003 12:16 PM).] |
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x8x_bigmike Member
since 2003-07-08
Posts 130California, USA |
i can no sooner hold on to you than the trees to the breeze that exhilerates them ________ just great poetry great stuff. Mike |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Excellent poem girlielocks~ |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
"and therein lies the key to your mystery, that on a day when the circus has left the sky, i can still, on an given moment, conjure up your smiling eyes above me," So many excellent lines here... I would have to copy the entire poem if asked to choose but one or two favourites. Amazing write here lady! ~Hugs, Nancy~ ~ I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before ~ |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
knowing that your gift is truly from the angels and probably too beauitful to break thru earth's fascade, as nothing real seems to sustain its first rush, anyhow, I copied this and then forgot to paste it! (say what) Love that verse!!! |
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dreambuilder Member
since 2003-03-23
Posts 319caddyshack |
Amazing I especially Loved this part: you sneek up on me between drops of rain, your picture framed by stars connected on a moving sky, -------------------------------------------- Soooooooo much I could identify with... sadly beauty, sorrow, longing, & so much more in this one I bow before thee Goddess Mike p.s. I trimmed my post - lol - though the sentiment remains . . . all that we see or seem is but a dream within a dream . . . [This message has been edited by dreambuilder (07-18-2003 09:03 PM).] |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
x......thanks and welcome to PIPS lorigirl........glad to see u here, as always i feel your heart too in your words here thank you nancy, a pleasure to find you here too lori again........glad those words can find their way to you.......and it does seem like anything real, just can't sustain for too long. dreamboy......yes, glad you can relate, tho it is from unfulfilled longing, and quite a different side here than the raving lunatic in mature, eh? different men, different impact on the soul |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
"I can still find you between the raindrops"--Ah, those exhillarating rainy days...  A beautiful write. Warm hugs, Linda |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Michelle - this has to be one of your best in my humble opinion. I love the words, as they are penned by a special person. Lovely, just lovely, and inspiring... BC |
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dreambuilder Member
since 2003-03-23
Posts 319caddyshack |
"please allow me to introduce myself" I'm not "mellow yellow" but instead crimson "Red" as I've been "flash"ed by some of the best poetry I've ever read she whispers " pop the cork, blue eyes" as I ease the afternoon away with a glass of wine her soul "invades me" as muses intertwine Just being blessed as I spend a few hours with someones poetry what a beautiful way to spend a day . . . all that we see or seem is but a dream within a dream . . . |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Now this one was a full bouquet. What treasures you hold in your talented little head! Hugs, TD |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
e.a......lets her it for loving in the rain bill....i am glad you can find something in these words for you td...thanks so much for stopping in and leaving those kind words dreamyboy......yesterday was flowers, today the wine, and reading my soul in my poetry are you trying to seduce mrs. robinson, benjamin?  |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
. . . sneaking in to say this is beautiful . . . sneaking back out quickly xxoo |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
yes, sue....scat........ lol |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
you are a very deep lady michele....always love how you see things |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
bittersweet Mishy |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
you sneek up on me between drops of rain, your picture framed by stars connected on a moving sky, Michele, this is just beautiful......  Hugs  Ethel |
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dreambuilder Member
since 2003-03-23
Posts 319caddyshack |
 maybe - lol is it working Mike I'm gonna have ta rent that movie lmao . . . all that we see or seem is but a dream within a dream . . . |
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bklynboy Senior Member
since 2002-12-15
Posts 660florida |
Wow...this is terrific. Another hit on your hit parade. I guess in your long absence you had a lot of time to reflect and ponder. Your stuff gets better all the time! |
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