Open Poetry #27 |
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More than I asked for |
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Jason Lyle Senior Member
since 2003-02-07
Posts 1438With my darkling |
She tempts me knowing my weakness is a fine woman and a good drink and she tells me no strings attached And she means it Would you say no to Isis? She threatens me with a good time did you think that roughing me up would scare me off? She will get what she asked for and it may be more than she asked for It may be more, than I asked for [This message has been edited by Jason Lyle (06-14-2003 09:30 PM).] |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
wow what a write,,,, QjQ |
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Foxyoasis Senior Member
since 2003-06-10
Posts 974Atlantic Beach,Fla |
sigh*i know how you feel. good write Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me..... |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
wow! |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
A great write. Always be careful of that for which you ask. *smile* |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Damnnnnn Jason . . . . now thats what I'm talkin about . . . nice strong write kinda scary - like this side of you xxoo |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
Would you say no to Isis? dont turn it down, it doesnt come along every day does it? |
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Gina Culliney Member
since 2003-03-08
Posts 170 |
Hauntingly beautiful, chilling the soul to the marrow of the bones. Well done Darkling, as usual. |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
depends what she looks like..oh i'm gonna get hell for that |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Enjoyed your write indeed ARCTIC WIND |
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