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vlraynes
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

0 posted 2003-07-17 10:27 PM

Silent Dream

My life-long friend got married today
I stood up for his bride
Such deep devotion they two share
I could not help but cry

Their vows were spoken from the heart
No script or prompting needed
I wonder if he knows
Each word she said my heart repeated

She truly loves him from her soul
She'll cherish him I know
But can he see deep in my heart
My love for him still grows

My life-long dream was silenced today
In their romantic bliss
And as I looked into his eyes
His bride stole my last kiss

-vlraynes

Reposted by Request

"So here I am with pockets full of good intentions
But none of them will comfort me tonight..." ~Carpenters
[This message has been edited by vlraynes (07-18-2003 05:25 AM).]

Amature2
Member

since 2001-01-08

Posts 416

1 posted 2003-07-17 10:42 PM

vlraynes, this has left me speechless.

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

2 posted 2003-07-17 10:45 PM

Oh my...how sad..excellent write..
Heart Hugs, Nancy.

~ I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before ~

Skyfire

Member Elite

since 2000-12-27

Posts 3381
Riding

3 posted 2003-07-18 01:04 AM

Aw I remember this one

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

4 posted 2003-07-18 02:42 AM

Kielo
Senior Member

since 2002-02-11

Posts 1109

5 posted 2003-07-18 02:55 AM

The only thing I can think of to say undermines the entire thing very badly, so I'll just keep my mouth shut. It was good.... just not particularly pleasant....

It's ok. I still love you!

Kielo

I'll never know the cost, but all of Him is more than enough for all of me....

JaiOfHeaven
Member

since 2003-04-12

Posts 207
California, Usa

6 posted 2003-07-18 03:33 AM

It was sad and twisted.
Though, happy and loveable.
Your pain was felt.
Two thumbs up!
Check out my post "jo"
I tried a new style.

Jai

QjQ
Member Elite

since 2003-04-18

Posts 3756
U.S.A.

7 posted 2003-07-18 06:24 AM

very nicely expressed,,,,

A voice of honesty
   is treasured
more than voices
   of flattery
      QjQ

x8x_bigmike
Member

since 2003-07-08

Posts 130
California, USA

8 posted 2003-07-18 06:47 AM

Ive been there...not in your shoes but in the pue, watching it happen but in a not so nice way...there is honor in realizing someone elses love for the person in your heart is real as much as your own is...i too was left speechless...

Mike

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

9 posted 2003-07-18 10:22 AM

Vicky~
Oh my little rhymer gal ... you KNOW I love it~

Love you bestest of all~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
[email protected]

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

10 posted 2003-07-18 11:33 AM

Well that's no fair, and kind of hard to watch.
I suppose it adds closure if nothing else.

Peace good poetess~

Soleil Noir
Senior Member

since 2001-12-19

Posts 688
USA

11 posted 2003-07-18 11:40 AM

I'm so glad
that you listen
to voices on the wind
Vicky...

a marvelous write...

Martie

Moderator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

12 posted 2003-07-18 11:55 AM

Vicky...It takes courage to be the friend of your friend under these circumstances. I commend your heart!

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