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CrAzI_bAbI_cHiKa
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since 2003-07-16

Posts 248

0 posted 2003-07-17 10:00 PM

he blinked away tears as he entered the room
nobody knew his sorrow, his gloom
he put up a face, decieving them all
for he didnt feel they were friends he could call
all he did was love, and hope for the same,
but she tore his heart, and forgotten his name
life felt meaningless, but no one knew
how empty he felt now they were through
he saw no day, but only felt night
he knew only darkness, never light
they'd had broken only two days before
butit felt longer, he didnt know how to live anymore
he talked to his pals without recalling a word
and he didnt really hear what he'd heard
his heart felt empty but full as well
but nobody knew, nobody could tell
he was a boy with many faces and masks
he had it all, it was just she he lacks
no matter how hard eh tried to move on
he'd get past her, but then'd hear their song
but nobody knew, and nobody cared
cause he wouldnt tell a soul about how he faired
so he kept his anger and sorrow inside
angry and confused about how she'd lied
he found only one way to escape the pain
and managed to fall in love with a girl named jane

How come you have enough time to go out and make other people fall in love with you, but you cant spare a second to deal with those who already do?

[This message has been edited by CrAzI_bAbI_cHiKa (07-17-2003 10:08 PM).]

JaiOfHeaven
Member

since 2003-04-12

Posts 207
California, Usa

1 posted 2003-07-17 10:14 PM

Sad... Something I'm kinda going through.
Yet it seems if I find another.
I really didn't care about her much.
To not fight for the love,
the love my heart feels so vividly.
It was a nice write..thank you for the input.

Jai

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

2 posted 2003-07-18 05:42 PM

We all hope that another shares the same feelings as us, and in some cases they will but in most cases they don't...so when this can clearly be determined, such as when they have gone on with their lives and we haven't it doesn't seem like such a hard choice to make, to go on...James

x8x_bigmike
Member

since 2003-07-08

Posts 130
California, USA

3 posted 2003-07-18 06:17 PM

touching... i too have been there.

Mike

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littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

4 posted 2003-07-19 09:47 PM

Good Lord Keryn . . . you know
so very true - peeking into my life there eh?

Nice job
xxoo

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

5 posted 2003-07-19 09:49 PM

CrAzI_bAbI_cHiKa - and I bet that Jane made him forget...

BC

angelblueyes
Member Elite

since 2003-07-19

Posts 2148
Oklahoma

6 posted 2003-07-19 10:35 PM

Your words ring true. an excellent write.
angelblueyes

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