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JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2003-07-17 04:32 PM

Nights of Sweet Dreams

Like sweet Hawaiian trade winds
you whispered soothing words in my ear.
In silky moments you spoke the
delicious words I desired to hear.
Yes, yes I would love to be your friend.
Flow to me in the magic of the trade winds.
How sweet of you to come to me bearing gifts.
It is time for the nights of
the sweet dreams to begin.
In want, in need, in desire, come
to me in sweet dreams my friend.

JamesLee
July17
2003

[This message has been edited by JamesMichael (07-17-2003 04:35 PM).]

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

1 posted 2003-07-17 04:40 PM

Oh how softly romantic...
I could feel the gentle summer breeze...
Very lovely James.
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~If you haven't heard the sunset,
you haven't been listening.~

QjQ
Member Elite

since 2003-04-18

Posts 3756
U.S.A.

2 posted 2003-07-17 08:28 PM

very nicely expressed,,,,

A voice of honesty
   is treasured
more than voices
   of flattery
      QjQ

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

3 posted 2003-07-17 09:22 PM

James - one sweet dream this one is...

BC

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

4 posted 2003-07-18 05:23 AM

Thank you Enchantress, QJQ and Bill for the nice responses...
I needed some sweet dreams and I got them...James

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

5 posted 2003-07-18 07:01 PM

James, this is really a sweet
romantic poem. I liked it.

"If I know there's no possible way I can change something....I push it to the back room
in my mind & slam the door on it." Gary~ Heart hugs, Ethel

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

6 posted 2003-07-18 07:30 PM

enjoyed

angelblueyes
Member Elite

since 2003-07-19

Posts 2148
Oklahoma

7 posted 2003-07-19 04:24 AM

I enjoyed the romantcism and the softness of this.Very well indeed.
angelblueyes

A Romantic Heart
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-03

Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart

8 posted 2003-07-19 07:06 AM

ver descriptive and romantic!
~enjoyed~ARH

Bonnie j
Senior Member

since 2003-06-27

Posts 1588
Ohio

9 posted 2003-07-19 09:27 AM

A very romantic write about a person's dreams. If you have a chance you might enjoy Nighttime Dreams and Misty Dreams.
Keep those words coming and I'll keep on reading.
Bonnie j

Gina Culliney
Member

since 2003-03-08

Posts 170

10 posted 2003-07-21 06:23 PM

Exotic and dreamy. well done.

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