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catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

0 posted 2003-07-17 11:57 AM

I travel light, my bag of dreams
clutched beneath my lonely heart
no need for books of poetry
I wander through the forest dark.

I tread upon a wayward path
the one I missed so long ago
tis not too late for a new step
which carries me where e'r I go.

At moonlights glow the passions rise
though little do I have to share
just dreams of that which still may come
if truth be known, someone does care.

Such dreams can rid the world of ills
and bring forth hope and peace and love
my journey nears completion now
my heart still strong with remnants of.

[This message has been edited by catalinamoon (07-17-2003 01:27 PM).]

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

1 posted 2003-07-17 12:24 PM

Sandra, I travel light too lady...I love this write, the ending is incredible!

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

2 posted 2003-07-17 12:53 PM

The quiet resolve in your poem is so beautiful.
This one whispers ever so softly to me.

Fabulous writing Sandra~ Warm hugs sweet one.

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

3 posted 2003-07-17 01:13 PM

Beautiful Sandra..
Did I tell you how good it is to see you posting again?
Be happy...be well.
~Hugs, Nancy~

~If you haven't heard the sunset,
you haven't been listening.~

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

4 posted 2003-07-17 01:30 PM

Such dreams can rid the world of ills
and bring forth hope and peace and love
my journey nears completion now
my heart still strong with remnants of.

Sandra, this is so beautiful....
and it's so peaceful feeling.

Hugs

Ethel

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

5 posted 2003-07-17 04:15 PM

And that is the journey...sharing in caring...james

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

6 posted 2003-07-17 04:20 PM

"I travel light, my bag of dreams
clutched beneath my lonely heart"

Yep...that is very smooth...nice.

Susan C.

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

7 posted 2003-07-17 08:03 PM

CatalinaMoon~

'if truth be known, someone does care'

What a wistfully beautiful thought~
Nice to read you dear lady~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
[email protected]

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

8 posted 2003-07-17 08:09 PM

my journey nears completion now
my heart still strong with remnants of.

a great ending...loved it Sandra...
"if truth be known"

hugss
M

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

9 posted 2003-07-17 08:20 PM

beautiful writing Sandra glad someone still has hope

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

10 posted 2003-07-17 08:53 PM

Sandra,
A wonderful write right up my alley.

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

11 posted 2003-07-17 09:07 PM

catalinamoon - a step to the left, a step to the right, one step will be good to you...

BC

vlraynes
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

12 posted 2003-07-17 10:56 PM

I always love reading you, Sandra, and
tonight is no exception. This is lovely.
Hugs,
~Vicky

"So here I am with pockets full of good intentions
But none of them will comfort me tonight..." ~Carpenters

ctowen
Member Elite

since 2001-10-18

Posts 2286
Green Mountains of VT

13 posted 2003-07-18 02:00 AM

BOSTON

... Walk On ...

the instrumental plays as I read

great stuff from a great heart

peppermint35
Senior Member

since 2000-05-28

Posts 1106
Texas, USA

14 posted 2003-07-19 05:55 AM

I don't know how I missed this; but, as I expect, wonderfully expressive write

Pepper
"A poem is the very image of life expressed in its eternal truth."
Percy Bysshe Shelley

Wind

Member Elite

since 2002-10-12

Posts 2981

15 posted 2003-07-19 02:17 PM

I loved the strength you showed in this one

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

16 posted 2003-07-19 03:19 PM

:-)
Wow!
Keep up the good work!
I love it!

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

Ericc
Member Elite

since 2003-01-31

Posts 4178

17 posted 2003-07-19 03:21 PM

Soft and beautiful.
Eric

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

18 posted 2003-07-19 07:22 PM

You walk in peace and love towards fulfillment of your dreams.
Very beautiful.
Love, Margherita

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

19 posted 2003-07-20 04:42 AM

Good for you Sandra - keep the hope alive
Such a sweet soul not to
xxoo

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

20 posted 2003-07-20 07:46 AM

light love and hope
good words throughout

Patricia
Member Elite

since 2003-04-06

Posts 2160
Missouri

21 posted 2003-07-20 08:31 AM

I tread upon a wayward path
the one I missed so long ago
tis not too late for a new step
which carries me where e'r I go.

It's never too late for a new step. Your words captures my life perfectly at this point in time. I am just few steps away from the right path...the one I believe is right for me.

This verse is a wonderful in every way.

Patricia

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