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Senryu (Haiku) |
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brian sites Senior Member
since 2002-06-25
Posts 1475usa 
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essence enchained with a drop of blood, muscle, skin the bones are counted |
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Deus Junior Member
since 2003-07-17
Posts 18California, US |
That is one of the most advanced haikus I've ever read. Nice job. Leisure, not life. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
madzenviking.... oh I get it... mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm...gleeeeeeeee...  (I DO get the next dance, don't I?) |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Nice work, Viking... |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
This?...very cool...me likes it!  "So here I am with pockets full of good intentions |
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Jason Lyle Senior Member
since 2003-02-07
Posts 1438With my darkling |
As always, awesome writing Brian. Jason |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
The bones are counted....5-7-5 An enigmatic Japanese poem thingy, turned on itself. Cool one dude! |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Indeed the bones are counted... loved that! Excellent |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
keeping this. xx Instant karma's gonna get you. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
brian, Well done. |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Bryan, this is so good!!  Hugs  Ethel |
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