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Kaoru

Member Elite

since 2003-06-07

Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow

0 posted 2003-07-16 10:04 PM

This day I realize,
a hazy layer
covers the sky.

Deja Vu,
I remember this sun,
Though it burned me
years ago.

The trees
breathe to me,
as a heatwave wind
approaches.

You attempt to
kiss me,
my lips deny.

For in this sky,
the light
hits you
in a certain way.

Sweet flowers beckon
resistance.
I let the aroma sink in,
oblivious
to the instance.

You are not worthy
of me.

QjQ
Member Elite

since 2003-04-18

Posts 3756
U.S.A.

1 posted 2003-07-16 10:07 PM

I enjoy your writes,,,

A voice of honesty
   is treasured
more than voices
   of flattery
      QjQ

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

2 posted 2003-07-18 05:30 PM

So this is why some women won't let me kiss them...James

x8x_bigmike
Member

since 2003-07-08

Posts 130
California, USA

3 posted 2003-07-18 05:31 PM

I loved this one...the way you put so much feeling is so many small faces...great stuff..

Mike

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Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

4 posted 2003-07-19 04:08 AM

Great write, reminds me of a song by POE (anybody else remember her?..sighs)though not as sad thankfully

angelblueyes
Member Elite

since 2003-07-19

Posts 2148
Oklahoma

5 posted 2003-07-19 04:12 AM

Great write. I look forward to reading more.
angelblueyes

Kaoru

Member Elite

since 2003-06-07

Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow

6 posted 2003-07-19 12:56 PM

"'Cause that day never should have taken place
'Cause this day in my life still cannot explain
Why I listened in the first place
to you"

Yeah, I've heard of her, Aenimal