Open Poetry #27 |
Desire, and guilt (rewrite of lost without you |
RedStoneEB Senior Member
since 2003-06-08
Posts 772uk |
Desire, and guilt (rewrite of lost without you) Fighting consuming darkness Constantly dwelling on ones mind Shattered dreams arise, favoured covered lies. Tear sparkled river formed Essence of grief, drawn water Flowed lingering thoughts to rest. Vessel hoped, passageways collided Many paths to one, linked truth Image flickered thoughts remained. Distant memory coated wall Drenched, blood stained rose scattered ground Smeared with, bare light footsteps. Sweated palmed hands, leaked out fear Breath, tangled rusted choked within Eyes drained, tears vanquished overruled. Nearer footsteps draw, sounded pounded echoes Your touch scorched, burnt skin flutters unbearable air Wrenched in your scent, the man killer substance. Flirted comment pasted, game begun Gentle kiss, a lie forced upon a soul A rush of guilt and lust combined shame. Memory faded, cleared mind, flushed Extinguished-smoke, poison spilt out cloud Emptiness, filled new thought, corrodes. Lee Hepworth |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
This is such a rollercoaster of words. Enjoyed the ride |
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JaiOfHeaven Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 207California, Usa |
Whoa....much improvement. I read your other one. Man...killer substance. so true....some "girls" are capable of this. |
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