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Is It Really Love
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Is It Really Love |
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babygurl55 Junior Member
since 2003-05-28
Posts 18 |
You don’t realize how much you love someone until there really gone You didn’t realize how special they were when they were actually with you But now that there gone you now realize everything And you can remember every detail about them The way they smile And the way they always know how to make you laugh The way their touch comforts you when you are feeling alone or down But now that there gone you realize everything. So before you say good-bye when you are talking to them on the phone Make sure you say I love you Or else you might never get the chance When you say it make sure that you mean it Or it means nothing |
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JaiOfHeaven Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 207California, Usa |
I guess...I'm not one to say.., but welcome here. Your poetry spoke more truth than anything..something always appreciated. When you write try and explain the everything that you realize. It'll sound more intimate. That's what gets reader's attention. |
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Albert J. Allie Senior Member
since 2003-02-13
Posts 512Queens NY |
Words directly from the heart. That is exactly what poetry is!!!! beautiful |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
There's a lot of truth and good advice in this poem. I really enjoyed reading it.  Hugs  Ethel |
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