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dreams and plate glass windows
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dreams and plate glass windows |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space 
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offering a view of a world beyond these walls i reach for it each time my face smashing against the glass |
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Soleil Noir Senior Member
since 2001-12-19
Posts 688USA |
Please remove yourself from my mirror.  Your poetry is biting this morning... it needs a bagel. |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
oh this feels like insanity. when did u join my ward? the smashing head against glass, powerful powerful visions. I feel the frustration to the tips of my toes in reading this. |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
grins thanks Soleil Join your ward? listen mcmurphy i've been a resident psycho for ages..and a half a cigarette is not worth five cents..play the game harding |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Please open the window next time lol and no more watching that movie! This reminds me of the fly write xxoo |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
thanks Sue guess its similar i sometimes get redundant in my themes |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
I didnt mean that . . . this is much different yw |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
as usual, you are brilliant, my canada friend, but can youdo a soft ballad soon, okay?  |
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Kielo Senior Member
since 2002-02-11
Posts 1109 |
Yup, I know that feeling. (Figuratively and -  - literally too). Breaking the glass hurts even more though, eh? Kielo |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Oouucchhhhh!! That hurt!!  |
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timothysangel1973
since 2001-12-03
Posts 1725Never close enough |
I feel like I've hit that wall zillions of times...and keep on running into it, over and over again! Great write |
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JaiOfHeaven Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 207California, Usa |
Wish there were no glass... Ficticious yearnings never gained. Reminded me to grab (insert dangerous item here) and continue my quest to break it. Thanks. Jai |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
I know Sue but i do seem to run over the same old ground its all good Not likely anytime soon inked Kielo i know it literally to, once broke the glass chasing after my brother as a kid grins..Ethel thanks the prefect smiley Timsangel yeah we never seem to learn..damn humans..that's why i'm not human anymore Thanks Jai wear goggles |
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Kielo Senior Member
since 2002-02-11
Posts 1109 |
 Broke the glass?! Ouch.... Mine isn't nearly so bad. I came out of this big meeting for a break, to get some plums. I had just finished protesting to a friend of mine that I was not stupid. Beside the open glass doors were large glass windows, and it was dark. Imagine my surprise when I walked into a window. Imagine my embarassment when I realised that there were about fifty people who saw and laughed.... it was pretty funny. I walked back in and told my friend, "I changed my mind. I'm stupid." lol... Kielo I'll never know the cost, but all of Him is more than enough for all of me.... |
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Foxyoasis Senior Member
since 2003-06-10
Posts 974Atlantic Beach,Fla |
very good. different that is what i like about it best. Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me..... |
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marcel Senior Member
since 2003-03-02
Posts 660az, usa |
such beauty clashing with the reality of life; yes, we all have scars--very clever and creative poem. |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
it's when we dream, that we reach through that glass....we won't talk about the waking up part....  |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Your response reminds me of a tune I know well . . . [This message has been edited by littlewing (07-18-2003 10:15 PM).] |
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Jason Lyle Senior Member
since 2003-02-07
Posts 1438With my darkling |
Phil...I remember Phil...he pushed and pushed in high school.One day I shoved poor Phils head through a window.He was not hurt...but he never pushed so hard again. Phil needed release. Jason |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Kielo tried to punch or reach for him and went right through the glass..lol thanks foxy appreciate it thank you marcel waking up sucks Susan..mild comas..the ultimate answer..sigh Sue wasn't even thinking it but yeah..need to listen to that now Jason that's my boy lol sometimes you have to learn em good grins |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
OK you: I'm looking for Raph poems first ...and then Gems..and Dixie's and Megs... ya leave for a little week and see what ya miss? (I'm sticking with yellow. Only when I get the dark bar) [This message has been edited by Wind (07-19-2003 05:23 PM).] |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
well . . . have you listened? |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Grins thanks Liz Sue no i was going to then chose APC i needed to here Judith over and over |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Excellent choice . . . needed to hear it myself |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I've got a thing for breaking glass. There's just something very satisfying about the sound. But...chuckle, rumor has it that I am crazy too. "ah...Juicy Fruit." |
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Miah Senior Member
since 2002-08-26
Posts 1062Pennsylvania |
Doh! Windows are meant to be broken... or is that rules? |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
K isn't it the greatest, the best is the long lightbulbs we use in the factory those suckers explode on impact its such a beautiful sound lol Miah it's thick glass h*opefully eventually maybe it'll break |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Raph...I'll just bet those long lightbulbs do make quite the enjoyable sound..LOL. I enjoyed this one, sir. Hugs, ~Vicky "My friends are my estate." |
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Miah Senior Member
since 2002-08-26
Posts 1062Pennsylvania |
It will If your dreams are stronger then the glass. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Gee, I've had a similar dream! I wonder what that means?  May all your dreams be sweet--and safe! EA |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
vicky its fantastic i break the new ones too Miah or my head Linda one day I dont sleep enough to give them time |
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SharaRose Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2501Somewhere out there~ |
Tears............................. :'( SharaRose @-->-- Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer! |
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dertah Senior Member
since 2003-06-18
Posts 584 |
short and sweet. kah kah, kah kah tookie tookie. |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
perhaps a window may open....... K |
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