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Open Poetry #27

Submerged

Amature2
Member

since 2001-01-08

Posts 416

0 posted 2003-07-16 08:48 AM

Submerged

Sometimes when dreams
Seem to be on track
Something happens
To set them off track
A tranquil setting
Turns into a nightmare
A shimmering lake
Turns into a
Torrent waterfall
And you get swallowed
Out of reality

"Who am I? Why am i here?" Admiral James Stockdale

[This message has been edited by Amature2 (07-16-2003 09:24 AM).]

Jeremiah Johnson
Senior Member

since 2000-06-08

Posts 1223
Brooksville, Fl, U.S

1 posted 2003-07-16 09:08 AM

short, sweet and all to true. i enjoyed very much. hope too see more.

I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson-

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

2 posted 2003-07-17 05:02 PM

I noticed that...thats when patience is learned...James

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