Open Poetry #27 |
Brine's House of Love |
A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Brine's House of Love
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JaiOfHeaven Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 207California, Usa |
Nice... [This message has been edited by JaiOfHeaven (07-16-2003 04:26 AM).] |
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JaiOfHeaven Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 207California, Usa |
Romantic heart indeed. heh. Gotta love them beach houses! You're a good writer Don't worry about your heart being broken, just head back to the house of love...lol |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
Absolutely brilliantly beautiful...as each day passes your poetry gets better and better....it is stronger now....the passion has died down slightly and for the better...but the depth and maturity of your love shines through....you are ''seing'' things better now too..more focused on the detail....''paint peeling'' etc...before you might say a seagull passed over now you describe and ''control'' how it passes over and what speed it goes....thank you my love...you are certainly getting more confident and writing just excelantly.... love Goldenrose.xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx |
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