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Alter Ego Moon
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Alter Ego Moon |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
* * Golden peach and purple bed the setting sun’s escape Blanketed in azure grand, swept by night falls velvet cape Flickered a goodbye note, and a smile from firefly Blown a kiss so soothing on the breezed and balmy sky Calm, and all around has settled an accepting plea Browsers walk the footpaths keeping watch on sunset faithfully The air portends the coming of a changing guard And glistening as moonlights maiden, dew sets down on natures yard Cool, the welcomed breezes rustled through green sentinels Straight and strong in limber long, leaved and flowered pedestals Approaching moon, batons now passed, in a phase resplendent The other light entrusted, shaped in alter incandescent Copyright Kkh 7/15/03 |
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SuperDave Junior Member
since 2002-09-12
Posts 48Little House on the Hill |
Very good! I especially like Cool, the welcomed breezes rustled through green sentinels Straight and strong in limber long, leaved and flowered pedestals Approaching moon, batons now passed, in a phase resplendent The other light entrusted, shaped in alter incandescent A great finish. David |
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Tim Senior Member
since 1999-06-08
Posts 1794 |
Nicely written, I enjoyed. |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Your poetry leaves a lasting and soothing effect. Thank you Kathleen, for being such a comfort to me. |
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JaiOfHeaven Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 207California, Usa |
You have a style similar to mine. It seemed...when I felt a feeling...there was a pause in all the right places. Something too subliminal to put into words. Thanks for the read...and keep writing everyday.. |
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JaiOfHeaven Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 207California, Usa |
You have a style similar to mine. It seemed...when I felt a feeling...there was a pause in all the right places. Thanks for the read and keep writing everyday. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
light and airy feeling, peaceful |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
great read n write,,,, A voice of honesty |
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Saunni Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777West Virginia |
This is beyond words, beyond beautiful and beyond breathtaking. Sincerely. Sauni  Sauni:)The Only Time I See The Sun Is When I'm Within That Vanilla Breeze.The Only Time I'm One With The Sun Is When He Shelters Me From The Rain. L.S |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
The air portends the coming of a changing guard And glistening as moonlights maiden, dew sets down on natures yard if i had a hour to live, id want to spend it gazing at the sunset, who wouldnt? beautiful as always, TD |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Thank you for your kind and encouraging notes. I have an afinity for light, as you can tell. Very blessed to share it with all of you. I especially appreciate all your inspiration. TD |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
ThisDiamond~ You've shown her light in beautiful word-facets~ I 'knew' I'd like it ... and I did~ Just so very, very lovely are your thoughts~ We both seem to share this moon-thang~  *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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