Open Poetry #27 |
Romantic Interlude |
QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
our silhouettes cast shadows in the serene of solitude ~ as i look into your eyes i see the reflection of my love within ~ all at once we voluntary surrender our selves to each ~ we have shared many encounters of romantic interludes together A voice of honesty |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Nicely done. Really liked the couplets, they give such power to the capsules of emotion beating in each. TD |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Just lovely, QjQ...such beautiful heart thoughts. Wonderfully done. Hugs, ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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timothysangel1973
since 2001-12-03
Posts 1725Never close enough |
"all at once we voluntary surrender our selves to each " Extremely powerful words QjQ |
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JilGirl Member
since 2003-05-24
Posts 364Washington |
Pleasant reading. GREAT write! 'Tiz feathers that make the bird - |
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El_Campeador Senior Member
since 2003-01-29
Posts 761Ohio, USA |
Keep sharing those romantic interludes... “We are all travelers in the wilderness of this world, and the best that we can find in our travels is an honest friend.” –Robert Louis Stevenson |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
a very pretty write |
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