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Open Poetry #27

Unencumbered

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2003-07-15 06:34 PM

Unencumbered

Today, I am unencumbered
with the feelings that
come from another's heart.
I am free like an eagle.
I can go wherever my heart desires.
Ride the magic of the wind.
See the beauty of nature that
God has created for the children
that he love and cares for.

Tomorrow, I will fly to you.
For though you have set me free,
it is you that possesses the
sweet heart that embraces me.

JamesLee
July15
2003

QjQ
Member Elite

since 2003-04-18

Posts 3756
U.S.A.

1 posted 2003-07-15 07:33 PM

excellent write n read,,,

A voice of honesty
   is treasured
more than voices
   of flattery
      QjQ

Tim
Senior Member

since 1999-06-08

Posts 1794

2 posted 2003-07-16 12:33 PM

A fine write indeed, enjoyed.

timothysangel1973

Senior Member

since 2001-12-03

Posts 1725
Never close enough

3 posted 2003-07-16 01:21 AM

"Tomorrow, I will fly to you.
For though you have set me free,
it is you that possesses the
sweet heart that embraces me."

Such a sweet and beautiful heart that inspires that pen of yours James!

I loved it!

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