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Is this what life is about?
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Is this what life is about? |
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Mon Cherie
since 2001-10-31
Posts 922Land of Never-ending Summers 
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Questions questions questions Flashed across my mind One after another At the speed of light Is this what life is about? Is there more to living? An endless drain of energy Why is it so tiring? Growing up was fine Hopes and dreams galore Career was a matter of passion Gaining independence and more What I see now is so different Pressure and responsibilities Weighing heavily on my shoulders Almost crushing me _,,,^.^,,,_ |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
terrific thoughts on life expressed,,, QjQ |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
Well, yes life sucks...then we die...then we get to do it again...etc...etc...until one lifetime it is done...then we move on... *smile* Well done poem! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
yep...that's why I wonder why kids are in such a hurry to grow up... |
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gyiel marlok Member
since 2003-06-08
Posts 145OHIO |
WE'LL ALWAYS HAVE QUESTIONS,SWEET WRITE |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
. . . like a rock on your chest Yes I know . . . Life . . . *shaking head* nice write xxoo |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
It does require a balance of work and play...the free time is all yours...enjoy your passions...James |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggssssssss) You know, that is what people are MAKING life about, but just because that's a fact doesn't mean this is what life IS about! No, life is so much more and people don't realize it very often, they have wrong impressions of what freedom is, like they think driving a car is freedom. No, sorry, wrong, but thanks for playing!!! Driving has more responsibilities than ever, you have to obey the rules, fellow passengers, and your own attitude, or you can get penalized! (sad sigh) If only everyone knew what real life is all about, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Florence, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
icebox has it right listen to him grin |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Yes.... the real name of Atlas was -- Everyman. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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Mon Cherie
since 2001-10-31
Posts 922Land of Never-ending Summers |
Thanks for stopping by to read.  Yesh, sometimes we juz get so bogged down by work and everything. Juz need some free time to really rest and relax. _,,,^.^,,,_ |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
i think the key is to take some time out to cultivate some hobbies not at all related to the job, even when it seems that you are dead tired and all you want to do is sleep. helps to give us a sense of purpose and one needn't derive all his self worth from his job.... think you are doing fine with your swimming. any frontiers that you will like to conquer?  hope life doesn't feel so draining now... |
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