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Open Poetry #27

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Sunkissed
Senior Member

since 2002-12-03

Posts 610

0 posted 2003-07-15 08:51 AM

I should come out of hiding
Long enough to expose a little
Of this...

Only in moonlight
Where shadows obscure
Everything,
covering nothing

I could dance the rite
Of freedom

Bare

Exposed before crowds

None will know nor
understand my meaning
but one

The one my heart seeks
constantly

I should come out of hiding
Long enough to expose a little
of this...

But not today.

Sunkissed.

[This message has been edited by Sunkissed (07-15-2003 10:42 AM).]

Ericc
Member Elite

since 2003-01-31

Posts 4178

1 posted 2003-07-15 09:22 AM

Very poignant and tender.
Eric

Sunkissed
Senior Member

since 2002-12-03

Posts 610

2 posted 2003-07-15 09:27 AM

Thank you, Eric.

A compliment indeed, coming from such a talented and romantic poet as yourself.

Sunkissed.

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