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Waterfall |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow 
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I place heavy emphasis on impression. The placement of my words must compel, achieve perfection to the anatomy of the eye. Behind them, I make my home. Behold tear as waterfall. |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
very lovely critique, in an understanding and passionate way.... |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
awesome writing! I can relate to this, very well |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Nice and honest.... Beautifully said and done Kaoru~ |
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JaiOfHeaven Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 207California, Usa |
Don't be gentle..? hm... Well there's nothing I can say ungently. I like your writing personally...I already read another one of your works. I'm beginning to favor your writing too... |
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