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BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

0 posted 2003-07-14 11:12 PM

Don't ask me for my number
before you even know my name.

Save your song and dance
for another night out at the ball game.

Don't tell me how you ache
when we don't ache the same.

Don't mention meeting me halfway
as if I couldn't read a map.

Don't try to impress me with your golf game
and how you scored ten under par.

Don't talk about getting to know me
then turn around and slam the door.

Don't play me for a fool
or try to open up old wounds.

Don't tell me I'm going to lose you
or try to make me come unglued.

Don't be cheating on the back nine
just to even up the score.

Baby, you can drive my heart
but it won't get you very far.

Someday I'll get it right
and sink a hole in one.

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

1 posted 2003-07-14 11:14 PM

Sink a hole in one?--I think you just did!

Hugs'n smiles,
Linda

icebox
Member Elite

since 2003-05-03

Posts 4383
in the shadows

2 posted 2003-07-14 11:16 PM

Well crafted and well said.

Thank you for sharing this.

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

3 posted 2003-07-14 11:16 PM

dont send me anymore of your cookiecutter lines

youre recycled garbage with a twist, youre
just fortunate enuf to rhyme

where do these losers come from?

Janette

Member Elite

since 2001-07-20

Posts 2843
Chicagoland for now

4 posted 2003-07-14 11:52 PM

I think I know this guy, too ... hahahha! But then so many ... are the same.

Great write here.

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

5 posted 2003-07-14 11:57 PM

Golf sucks...go to the beach instead

love this line...

Don't ask me for my number
before you even know my name.

Good to see you back Lori-girl...the moth missed ya

Well ... OK ... but you have to wash it first.

(bumper sticker humor) ;)

Kaoru

Member Elite

since 2003-06-07

Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow

6 posted 2003-07-15 12:00 PM

"Don't tell me how you ache
when we don't ache the same."

Many, many great lines in this poem.
Awesome

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

7 posted 2003-07-15 12:36 PM

Thank you for being such a sweetie Linda~

Nice to see you here icebox, and thanks for your nice reply.

What a hoot you are girlie...thanks, I needed that!

Well some of em anyway....we shouldn't get into male bashing much less let them ruin our strategy.   Thanks alot for reading Janette~

Janet Marie~  You warm my heart to no end.  I just lost my way for
there for a little while.   Thank you sweet mothy lady.

Kaoru~  I think I could have revised those lines,
since everyone aches differently, so long as they just don't pour it on too thick!

Thanks so much for reading.

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

8 posted 2003-07-15 01:08 AM

Bluesy! Where have you been . . .
how dare you leave me all alone in here to fend for myself LOL

Don't talk about getting to know me
then turn around and slam the door.

yep . . . well this is a strong write
and I am proud of you
tweets
xxoo

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

9 posted 2003-07-15 01:16 AM

So funny you are Ms. Tweety bird!
Well I just needed to take some time
and have a good pout. Oh boo hoo me!

Thank you always, I missed you too.
(I never thought for a second you couldn't
hold your own) Hugs you, lots~

[This message has been edited by BluesSerenade (07-15-2003 01:24 AM).]

timothysangel1973

Senior Member

since 2001-12-03

Posts 1725
Never close enough

10 posted 2003-07-15 01:25 AM

Wonderful, powerful write Blues...

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

11 posted 2003-07-15 01:53 AM

Hi there angel woman~
I don't know how powerful this was...
but I thank you for saying so.
I think what's important is how
meaningless the score is in the first place.

ya know?

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

12 posted 2003-07-15 02:19 AM

very cool! I gotta remember this one! into my library it goes!

Paul Wilson

Member Elite

since 2002-07-07

Posts 4711
United States

13 posted 2003-07-15 07:45 AM

Blues~ Enjoyed. Carry a big club and you will make it par I mean far.LOL...Paul

"To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you"

Martie

Moderator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

14 posted 2003-07-15 12:01 PM

Lori

The course is full of traps and holes...just keep you eyes open. It's not where the ball ends up, it the trip across the green that's important.

Larry C

Member Patricius

since 2001-09-10

Posts 10286
United States

15 posted 2003-07-15 04:35 PM

Bluesie,
See, I knew you were gaining ground on this topic! You go girl...

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

16 posted 2003-07-15 04:43 PM

Hey Lori

I'm glad to see you back to0...and with a
real powerful write. this was good!!

Hugs

Ethel

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

17 posted 2003-07-15 05:09 PM

Hey Dixie girl, thanks a bunch.

Paul~ A girl has to come out swinging and take her best shot!
Thanks for reading my venting~

Martie~ I don't think anyone sees me quite the way you do.
Thank you for your knowing reply. hugs~

Larry~ It might take me awhile, but yes, I'm getting there, slowly but surely. Thank you dear man~

I wish I was writing about the things you do....
instead of chipping away at my words.
Many thanks to you Ethel~

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