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Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

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Listening to every heart

0 posted 2003-07-14 04:41 PM

It's one hundred four
heat index one e-le-ven
hear me siz-zl-ing...

vlraynes
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since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

1 posted 2003-07-14 04:48 PM

See your one-0-four
And I raise you eight degrees
one twelve in phoenix

"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes
[This message has been edited by vlraynes (07-14-2003 04:48 PM).]

Cpat Hair

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since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

2 posted 2003-07-14 04:50 PM

I thought to question
the temp of the outside air
but it was too hot

Susan Caldwell
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since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

3 posted 2003-07-14 04:50 PM

Yes, but soon I am going to have to build an ark and save every different walk of life...and there are a few I would like to leave behind...so I may not be the best woman for the job....

Trade you the rain for the heat?

Susan C.

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

4 posted 2003-07-14 05:12 PM

Karilea! Did ya try to fry the egg on the sidewalk yet?

Good grief that's hot!
~Hugs~

~If you haven't heard the sunset,
you haven't been listening.~

Dark Angel
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since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

5 posted 2003-07-14 05:14 PM

Please send some of that heat down here.. lol.

Maree

fate is not just
whose cooking smells good
but which way the wind blows

(Ani DiFranco)

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

6 posted 2003-07-14 05:15 PM

Sun, you're part of the problem! LOL

Huggums,
EA

Kaoru

Member Elite

since 2003-06-07

Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow

7 posted 2003-07-14 05:15 PM

Please, take the rain from me, I could use some sun!

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

8 posted 2003-07-14 06:14 PM

siz-zl-ling are you
well you have always done so
remember ... I do

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

x8x_bigmike
Member

since 2003-07-08

Posts 130
California, USA

9 posted 2003-07-14 06:27 PM

interting structure

Mike

scorpio
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since 2002-10-02

Posts 5178
right...there

10 posted 2003-07-14 08:04 PM

Whew..pass the lemonade..

believe in what your heart feels...

Ericc
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since 2003-01-31

Posts 4178

11 posted 2003-07-15 09:35 AM

I hear you...always hot!
Eric

dreambuilder
Member

since 2003-03-23

Posts 319
caddyshack

12 posted 2003-07-15 05:57 PM

hmmmmm
I like it hot
the side effects are pretty good
you get to tan & see people without 6 layers of clothes on - lol

cool write Karilea
DQ

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

13 posted 2003-07-15 06:01 PM

very nice

Tim
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since 1999-06-08

Posts 1794

14 posted 2003-07-16 12:37 PM

You only got up to 104?
Sheesh, it must be nice to live up north...
enjoyed the poem and we made it to 108.

timothysangel1973

Senior Member

since 2001-12-03

Posts 1725
Never close enough

15 posted 2003-07-16 12:48 PM

From the South I write
Eighty-three and it's midnight
Is sweating sexy?

vlraynes
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since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

16 posted 2003-07-16 12:52 PM

LOL @ Tima!

It's almost 10pm here, and still 100 degrees.
Is summer over yet?
"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

brian sites
Senior Member

since 2002-06-25

Posts 1475
usa

17 posted 2003-07-16 01:08 AM

so hot it makes
sunshine
fry

dang!
that's HOT

keep cool you

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

18 posted 2003-07-16 01:57 AM

But you ALWAYS sizzle, lady sunshine!

Hey, tomorrow we'll jump up a degree or two,
but I'll still be cooler than you.

ROTFL, I'm really sassy on a hot night.

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

19 posted 2003-07-16 02:13 AM

hehehe...lol...glad someone else is frying too

JaiOfHeaven
Member

since 2003-04-12

Posts 207
California, Usa

20 posted 2003-07-16 02:23 AM

It made me feel...well nothing. I just thought of the degress, but I couldn't feel how it felt really. All in all...the attempt was admirable. Perhaps if you speak upon how you personally were feeling...it would've been more forcible.

Mysteria

Member Laureate

since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

21 posted 2003-07-16 02:44 AM

I am "glowing" just thinking about a temperature like that as we have fans going like mad here and it is only reaching the 80's. I swear I am melting and I can't wait to get to my "good ole mountain home"

Find an air-conditioned mall - that works for me.

QjQ
Member Elite

since 2003-04-18

Posts 3756
U.S.A.

22 posted 2003-07-16 04:08 AM

gee i see everyone is haveing a cold wave,,
it's 120 here in bullhead city arizona,,

nice write "k"

A voice of honesty
   is treasured
more than voices
   of flattery
      QjQ

vlraynes
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since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

23 posted 2003-07-16 04:11 AM

Not too far behind ya, here in Phoenix, QjQ.
"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

Sunshine

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Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

24 posted 2003-07-16 06:57 AM

It's 5:56 a.m. - and we're cool now...it's 72....

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