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Forest Sleeper
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Forest Sleeper |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665
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Striding through the scented forest,birdsong rings out. Pale yellow of primrose, vivid blue of bluebells,carpet the ground. Suddenly stopping, silent, you i chance upon, sleeping beneath a tree, surrounded by forest flowers, the wood hushes, no more sound. Knealing i cover you with my cloak of midnight blue, observing the cool beauty of thy aspect, my heart pounds. Stirring gently, your eyes open slowly. Your deep volumous eyes are dark devouring dew glistening pools. Lowering my head to thy scarlet red lips,a kiss i plant on them,softly.....sweetly. Deeply sighing you are finaly come from the land of slumber. Cradling your sweet face in my hands, you smile a joyous smile, newly refreshed you embrace me warmly. Leaning i pick a tiny blue flower and place it in thy sweetly silky, shiny hair. A more perfect picture of loveliness never drew breath. Never do i want to leave this forest of love, always do i want to see you in the morning light, one thing and one thing only will part us.....death. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Well, I must admit, I have had some wonderful love poems written for me over the years, but never have they been of the caliber of yours, Dear Rose of Gold!  Warm hugs & a sigh or two... EA |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
ooooo, this is gorgeous! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...nice writing...James |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Phil: right out of a storybook indeed always do i want to see you in the morning light, what a beautiful wish . . . and Hey! I finally get to see you up there! xxoo |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Never do i want to leave this forest of love, always do i want to see you in the morning light, one thing and one thing only will part us.....death.(I love this line..and you) Forever my love,we shall be in our forest, my prince has come to awaken this sleeping beauty with thy kiss, even in death, my soul shall love thee..eternally, for our souls are burned together as two flames of love, nothing, in this life, nor our death will separate our love..our union of souls... I love how you always post in red and put my symbol, my heart at the top, to let me know your poem is for me! I love you for that! You make me so happy, and loved! xxxx Love...Your Sleeping Beauty [This message has been edited by A Romantic Heart (07-14-2003 07:19 PM).] |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
Beautiful poetry..  |
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