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Open Poetry #27

All The Times

LastMoments
Member

since 2003-03-07

Posts 92

0 posted 2003-07-13 09:43 PM

All the times I looked away
To hide from what could be
The end to my deepest hopes
The puncture of anxiety
The little pressure in my side
That slowly eats away
The care that just gives up
Because I can't care anymore

You took out my eyes
So no longer could i see
The pain you were making
That danced in front of me
You smiled when I left
There was no turning back
My feet engraved the ground
A trace of footsteps to be forgotten

All the times I should have been
But never seemed to be
The thing that sparked the hour
In the mists of shine
Never was I good enough
To trust in who I was
So now I curse the world
Because nothings left to have

Kaoru

Member Elite

since 2003-06-07

Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow

1 posted 2003-07-13 09:47 PM

"You took out my eyes
So no longer could i see
The pain you were making
That danced in front of me"

Wonderful lines,
loved this

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