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Open Poetry #27

Consider Yourself Lucky

Carolina
Member

since 2001-08-17

Posts 224
Myrtle Beach, SC

0 posted 2003-07-13 08:59 PM

You should consider yourself lucky
That I didn't die that night.
I chose to live
between the siren and the exams.
I knew my chance of seeing you
in a line-up
in this life
would be slim to none.
If I had not lived
I would have spent
eternity
haunting
you.
Consider yourself lucky.

Kaoru

Member Elite

since 2003-06-07

Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow

1 posted 2003-07-13 09:12 PM

"If I had not lived
I would have spent
eternity
haunting
you.
"

Powerful write,
enjoyed!

Local Rebel
Member Ascendant

since 1999-12-21

Posts 5767
Southern Abstentia

2 posted 2003-07-14 12:19 PM

this had to be very difficult to write

I'm glad he was lucky and you stuck around -- my very dear friend

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

3 posted 2003-07-14 01:01 AM

Interesting...James

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

4 posted 2003-07-14 04:08 AM

....happy you're around

Carolina
Member

since 2001-08-17

Posts 224
Myrtle Beach, SC

5 posted 2003-07-14 08:31 AM

Thank you, everyone. I'm a woman with a purpose in life.. now, if I can just figure out what that is. LOL

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