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Open Poetry #27

The Awakening

anwaarhassan
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since 2003-07-09

Posts 181
Menifee, CA

0 posted 2003-07-13 07:57 PM

Life was dark and lonely
The heart cold and still
And love, a bitter memory
That tormented the mind at will.

Then upon the far horizon,
Of this wreck of humanity
There dawned a ray of pure joy
Thus ending the solemn monotony.

The heart now throbs with warmth
And life’s a wondrous thrill
And love, a sweet heady wine
That inebriates the mind at will.

Kaoru

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since 2003-06-07

Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow

1 posted 2003-07-13 09:15 PM

"Life was dark and lonely
The heart cold and still
And love, a bitter memory
That tormented the mind at will."

Very enthralling words, this write is beautiful.

ice
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since 2003-05-17

Posts 3404
Pennsylvania

2 posted 2003-07-13 09:16 PM

Anwarr...
Seems as if your heart has reached the goal that all hearts strive for...:-)
Nicely written, begining, middle, and end stanza....says a lot , but with fine poetic brevity....enjoyed the read......ice

anwaarhassan
Member

since 2003-07-09

Posts 181
Menifee, CA

3 posted 2003-07-17 12:23 PM

Thank you Kaoru and ice.

Anwaar

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