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Full moon lunacy
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Full moon lunacy |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio 
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i am pointless as a parallelogram an octagon doesn't contain enough sides to define me i grow thru stacks of rocks don't prune me please, i cant stand being cut to conformity, if kids could color cows green, maybe columbines wouldn't happen, i'm a can of mixed nuts; a bowl of dyslexia off the track and off the rack, i met a homely man he tried to put a bandaid on me when i needed openheart surgery, he's just another deadend anyhow, probably stomping on another's givingheart, waving his mediocre love poetry to gain entry, i'd pass him over in the street if i came eye to eye no handsome prince was he, the lies, the lies, just make me hotter, fuel my fire, im a raving, starving witch, take me down to the paradise city i can only love a rock star for now, i put his poster on the wall and he wets my dreams tonight, would you join me for a bowl of alphabet soup? where do we begin to write another half-baked love story, do i even dare to hope anymore? i should shut my mouth, sit on the shelf like a potted plant for another 20 years, and cook my husband a decent dinner again. [This message has been edited by inkedgoddess (07-14-2003 06:18 AM).] |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
if kids could color cows green, maybe columbines wouldnt happen one of the greatest lines i've ever read |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Hard hitting, in that inkedgoddess sort 'o way. This was very powerful. Lots stirring inside that deep heart. TD |
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Local Rebel Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-21
Posts 5767Southern Abstentia |
"i'm mixed nuts; a bowl of dyslexia off the track and off the rack, i let an ugly man try to put a bandaid on me when i needed openheart surgery" a biting reproof and yet we abet the prater albeit a splendid portion for the rune Don't tell me to get a life -- I have one on backorder. |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Michele: an octagon doesn't contain enough sides to define me you got it and Michele? This tore at me , it did EVERY single line screaming . . . xxoo |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
inkedgoddess - you did say you were from brooklyn. I'm originally from Newburgh, NY. You tell it like it is in this write... BC |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
thanks raf, and yes i do belive when creative expression is curtailed at a young age, its a dominoe effect in the making.....tho of course i wouldnt endorse anarchy.....lol TD.....yes, it stirs and i stir with it bill..yes its the only way i know how...tho it makes me suffer at times too rebel.......please, please, the translation of the reply...thanks sue, yes..again, screaming like a lunatic to be heard |
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Local Rebel Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-21
Posts 5767Southern Abstentia |
some things are better learned than said acquired the hard way this lesson a good poem made from a bad taste |
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dreambuilder Member
since 2003-03-23
Posts 319caddyshack |
I loved this part: -------------------------------------------- i let a homely man try to put a bandaid on me when i needed openheart surgery, he's just another deadend anyhow, probably stomping on another's givingheart, waving his mediocre love poetry to gain entry, i'd pass him over in the street if i came eye to eye no handsome prince was he, the lies, the lies, -------------------------------------------- why did you even go for a prince a Goddess should go for a God great write & I'll be watching for more |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
oh Michele...like only you could say it good stuff here |
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bklynboy Senior Member
since 2002-12-15
Posts 660florida |
I can sense the anger that still lingers. Let it go. You are letting the toad win. Pretty strong stuff you are writing there kiddo. You are painting wonderful pictures. |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Michele...wow..there are so many excellent lines in this. Definitely one of your best writes...very powerful. Hugs, ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
You write so powerfully! I love this very much, definately a keeper.  |
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Skyfire
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
WOW  ... Even though you're gone ... |
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Skyfire
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
LOL oops forgot to click the add to library button ... Even though you're gone ... |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Very powerful write, Michele. I enjoyed reading it.  Hugs  Ethel |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Your full moon lunacy was illuminating! You write on the edge and push the envelope--and that makes your writing intriguing--and extrememly interesting to read! Several great lines in this beauty! Luvs 'n hugs, Linda |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
thanks rebel for the translation. dreamboat..yes, i dont know.....i touch down to earth on these mortals from time to time hoping to illuminate, but the frogs dont know how to receive my gifts, it seems bboy , my buddy, sorry i had a relapse over the long weekend viranes...thanks for seeing thru the lines sky......thank you for the nice words ethel..glad to please, thanks for your support e.angel...yes, the edge,is where i sit most days, hanging on and thank you |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
probably stomping on another's givingheart, waving his mediocre love poetry to gain entry, You never cease to amaze me girlielocks~ Love the raw passion you're serving up, and everything that goes with it, including the soup! |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
thanks kauro, for reading me loridear, glad you could enjoy the soup i aim for a clear broth, but i seem to sink into a crockpot of lunacy - altho its more fun, sometimes |
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dreambuilder Member
since 2003-03-23
Posts 319caddyshack |
lol - perhaps you have'nt kissed the right one - I'm sure there is one out there hopping & hoping for your gifts lol . . . all that we see or seem is but a dream within a dream . . . |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
struck by a moon beam in a moment of wonder,,, terrific write n read,, A voice of honesty |
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EmmaRose Senior Member
since 2011-03-02
Posts 1376Midwest |
LMFAO I am glad you are not her anymore |
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