Open Poetry #27 |
Quiet Sanctuary. |
Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
Mist shrouded horizon brings in the day, a solitary swan glides over the rippleing lake,caught by the winds breath. Bird calls ring out over the reserve,wrens, warblers and wildfowl,rejoice the morning new.Foxes hunt for rabbits,headed for certain death. Heron darting shockwaves across the still water, it's beedy eye on the fish in the shallows. Emerald green sheen of film on the lake,sliced by skimming swallows. Ghostly grey skies, stretch in all directions, shading the dawn,Slithers of blue appear at it's , edge as slowly the grey curtain is pulled back, to reveal the pristeen sunlit sky. Goldfinches undulate in flight, calling their liquidy call.Raucus rooks and crows dogfight over the field of sheep,tawny owls finnish their night of hunting and start their day of sleep. Noisy trumpeting geese,circle and surf the lake,gently gliding in on sking waves. They are the creatures of Mother nature, who created them all in her own special way. |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
Heron darting shockwaves across the still water, it's beedy eye on the fish in the shallows. Emerald green sheen of film on the lake,sliced by skimming swallows. ~~~~ I do love this, wonderful visions of nature at its best. loved the descriptions, you made them real. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
you take me there! |
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gyiel marlok Member
since 2003-06-08
Posts 145OHIO |
THE WINDS BREATH,SWEET WRITE |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
I think you have described the place I would like to go and just write poetry for days on end, We all need our quiet time and our Quiet Sanctuary..enjoyed the beauty! |
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Black Swan Member
since 2003-02-05
Posts 165on the moon |
I liked this,especially the part about the swan,hehe since I can't get to a place like that right now, I will just have to dream it..thanks for the vision ~Talia |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Sounds Lovely ARCTIC WIND |
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