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Janette
since 2001-07-20
Posts 2843Chicagoland for now 
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the observer Mr. technical person the man who cherishes facts I am but an observer having intently done that in regards to you my love uttering what I perceive does my knowing you so well shock and alarm you that much Janette |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
excellent! well said! |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
seems they often are very afraid of us knowing them, eh? Hope I got the idea of this correct. Did I mention that I LOVE seeing you out here in Open? You could hurt me with your bare hands. You could hurt me using the sharp edge of what you say. JEWEL |
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Janette
since 2001-07-20
Posts 2843Chicagoland for now |
passing shadows - Thanks, pretty Lady. Temptress - You got it exactly right, girl friend. And thanks about the "Open" comment, too. I am finding this an enjoyable challenge, writing here. Hopefully some will see that we "Mature" posters need not always be ... locked behind closed doors ... Hahahahah! ... andddddddd will come on over and visit there, post there and leave comments, too. Now wouldn't that be fun? |
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garysgirl 
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Janette, this reminds me of me and my Honey-Love. Sometimes we know each other so well that we know what the other is thinking. Kinda scary, sometimes....especially since we have a long-distance relationship. I guess that comes from being really observant. I enjoyed reading this and I'm glad to see you "out here" in Open, too. LOL  Hugs  Ethel [This message has been edited by garysgirl (07-13-2003 10:06 AM).] |
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Janette
since 2001-07-20
Posts 2843Chicagoland for now |
garysgirl - yes, the knowing ... can have its ups and downs ... glad to know your relationship has plenty of love to go the distance. And thank you for making me feel so welcome out here in ... the "Open." hahah! |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
another poem of yours to enjoy  M |
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Janette
since 2001-07-20
Posts 2843Chicagoland for now |
nakdthoughts - Ahhhhh...thanks so much for leaving this response to me. |
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Local Rebel Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-21
Posts 5767Southern Abstentia |
being known is not alarming in the sea of dna ripples amassing in metropolitan it is everyone knows and no one |
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Janette
since 2001-07-20
Posts 2843Chicagoland for now |
Local Rebel - hahaha ... perhaps, but I think we women feel it is more like inborn intuition, at times. Interesting response and I thank you for it dear sir. |
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Jennis#1 Member
since 2003-07-08
Posts 112IL, Usa |
Super poem. Please visit my lastest poems called austism poems. It would mean a lot to me if you did. Jenn |
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Janette
since 2001-07-20
Posts 2843Chicagoland for now |
Jennis#1 - thank you for taking the time to respond to me. I have gone to your latest post and have left you a response. Please do not be offended by my reply to you for I am only attempting to help a new, fellow writer here at Passions. Please keep writing and sharing. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
I want to be known. . . it is the only way to be. . . and to love. . . and yes, I too love seeing you out here in Open. . . it's the best place to be. . . ----------------------------------------------------------- I'm tired of pretending I don't love you. . . --Travis Tritt |
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Janette
since 2001-07-20
Posts 2843Chicagoland for now |
Sven - I am glad that you said that, dear friend, that you want to be known ... some men really hate it. Thank you for the read. |
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