For no one - pipTalk Forums

How to Join	Member's Area	Private Library	Search	Sanctuary		Login
Main Forums	Discussion	Tech Talk	Mature Content	Archives	A home without a wall, Our haven without ends, A circle we all call Our Family of Friends!

Open Poetry #27

For no one

gemjop
Member Elite

since 2002-11-18

Posts 2587
Pencilveinia, USA

0 posted 2003-07-12 10:45 PM

Fetch me the dead skin shovel
crawl over my pale
and back again
blow shallow cold over my hairs on end
rise with renewed wealth in quiet
like a blush of embarrassment
I stupidly let you in.

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

1 posted 2003-07-12 10:58 PM

I stupidly let you in.

Ah we can always count on ourselves to %&$^ things up again and again

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

2 posted 2003-07-13 02:30 AM

cool

Temptress

Moderator

Member Rara Avis

since 1999-06-15

Posts 7136
Mobile, AL

3 posted 2003-07-13 02:39 AM

Yep..

You could hurt me with your bare hands. You could hurt me using the sharp edge of what you say. JEWEL

Wind

Member Elite

since 2002-10-12

Posts 2981

4 posted 2003-07-13 10:46 AM

Gem, what did I tell you? lol. your poem was great- and it looks live a shovel. Hehe- to bury all the people you kill with your words.
~`The shivering peanut`~

If art is still inside, I feel it
-Aaron Lewes

[This message has been edited by Wind (07-13-2003 01:54 PM).]

Ericc
Member Elite

since 2003-01-31

Posts 4178

5 posted 2003-07-13 01:30 PM

So much depth...great writing.
Eric

Kaoru

Member Elite

since 2003-06-07

Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow

6 posted 2003-07-13 01:51 PM

Beautiful writing, as always..love the style and the flow of words..

	⇧ top of page ⇧
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.