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It's your turn
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It's your turn |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981
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You remind me, of every grain of sand I let slip through my hands take a look in the mirror You're a ghost- I knew it all along, It's why I built the grave in advance. Your hands are so cold, you've been dead too long to feel anything. What have we become? Match me- word for word, you're just a politician, trying to force me to your side you've got me tied at the crossroads My feet bleed from walking on glass too long. Now it's your turn If art is still inside, I feel it -Aaron Lewes [This message has been edited by Wind (07-12-2003 06:55 PM).] |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
Well written, really love your work  |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
oh myyyy word. i just died inside reading that. stop being psychic. You remind me, of every grain of sand I let slip through my hands take a look in the mirror oh you just know i know this.  i love wallowing in self pity. dont you? you've got me tied at the crossroads My feet bleed from walking on glass too long. Now it's your turn i know i just quoted practically the whole poem, but liz, i swear this hits me hard. SUCH a talented lady you are. I've been waiting for this post allll day, and i'm not disappointed. |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
you know me Gem- strictly one post a day. There is another one somewere that you missed, but I won't make you chase it. I knew youed feel this one Gemmy, that's why I posted it. Meg, thanks, I love your poems too If art is still inside, I feel it |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
"My feet bleed from walking on glass too long. Now it's your turn." Reminded me of something an ex said to me one time...but not as dramatically as this...James |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
re reading...sigh...aaaargh the pain. its 3 am here! i've just realised. whats up with me? |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Like this..a little anger a little bitterness..yes yes.. |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
its only 9:30 over here... sometimes I wished I lived in Europe  Then people would stop making fun of me and saying I only listen to British music? LOL GO TO BED. to save you time, I'll answer for you "yes mum" If art is still inside, I feel it |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
bloody hell, Raph is here Thanks bud, too busy replying to gem to see youIf art is still inside, I feel it |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
yeah, I know about those ghosts |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
you make me smile Dixie If art is still inside, I feel it |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
yeah yeah just ignoring me..sniff sniff..  |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
Goodnight GerRaph, I'm going to bed BEFORE three. I would never ignore you. How COULD I? If art is still inside, I feel it |
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