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gemjop
Member Elite

since 2002-11-18

Posts 2587
Pencilveinia, USA

0 posted 2003-07-12 06:32 PM

I forgot the crisp
of sheets curling
over and under flesh
as you slept
and I was sleepless.

Wind

Member Elite

since 2002-10-12

Posts 2981

1 posted 2003-07-12 06:48 PM

not sure what to say to this one. I've run out of sarcastic comments

or not

cheer up Gumdrop, but keep writing all the good stuff. It makes my day

If art is still inside, I feel it
-Aaron Lewes

gemjop
Member Elite

since 2002-11-18

Posts 2587
Pencilveinia, USA

2 posted 2003-07-12 07:08 PM

thanks miss lizzy. been having a sad day. full of reminiscing thats all. some things i miss, some i dont. this is half and half. i loved it, but hated it.

Ericc
Member Elite

since 2003-01-31

Posts 4178

3 posted 2003-07-12 07:41 PM

Awww....Gem...it's ok to be sad.
It is a channel to greater creativity and higher love. As you know....and show with these beautiful words.

A left a little message for you under your reply to my last poem.
Thanks!

Eric

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

4 posted 2003-07-12 07:51 PM

gemma:

is this is a good or bad thing to forget?
I know . . .
xxoo

Kaoru

Member Elite

since 2003-06-07

Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow

5 posted 2003-07-12 08:44 PM

I relate to this, somehow share that kind of memory.
Great write.

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

6 posted 2003-07-12 08:49 PM

Oh Gemma, I hate for you to be sad.

Loveya

Ethel Mae

Honeybee
Member Ascendant

since 1999-12-26

Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA

7 posted 2003-07-12 08:49 PM

You've said much here, and even with few words, this is poignant. And I relate to the love/hate contradictions of memories, how they are so beautiful, yet torture us so.

(btw Raph referred me to your poetry, he's a big fan and I have a feeling that I'll be one too

)

Melissa~

Intellectually I know that Canada is no better than any other country. Emotionally I KNOW that Canada is the best country in the world!

[This message has been edited by Honeybee (07-12-2003 08:50 PM).]

Jason Lyle
Senior Member

since 2003-02-07

Posts 1438
With my darkling

8 posted 2003-07-12 09:37 PM

Awesome write!

Love your work.

Jason

Wind

Member Elite

since 2002-10-12

Posts 2981

9 posted 2003-07-12 09:37 PM

Aww.. isn't Raph just so loyal? you gotta love that guy

If art is still inside, I feel it
-Aaron Lewes

vlraynes
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

10 posted 2003-07-13 01:18 AM

So much said in so few words...this one cuts deep.
Hugs,
~Vicky
"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

11 posted 2003-07-13 01:48 AM

*running for a tissue*

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

12 posted 2003-07-13 12:44 PM

I wss positive I'd replied to this..mind slipping in my old age..bittersweet write gem
reminds me of the style of an unkown russian writer named Oggo Sodov. I'll send it to you

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