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Open Poetry #27

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gemjop
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since 2002-11-18

Posts 2587
Pencilveinia, USA

0 posted 2003-07-12 11:19 AM

Voices of beauty

meanings crush tear

tired of flocking ache
descending upon
morning til night

hoping you wanted me there

I understand you needed me continuous

dying pointless without

I couldn't stop, nor wanted to
now it wont stop, when I want it to

you said you'd walked too far
to sit down this time

needing me, needing you

youre still everywhere.

Wind

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since 2002-10-12

Posts 2981

1 posted 2003-07-12 11:27 AM

I feel your pain. (because I can read your mind

)

I really liked this one. Ok, it was a little scary if I didn't know what you were talking about. Kind of like he's a ghost or something?

If art is still inside, I feel it
-Aaron Lewes

ctowen
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since 2001-10-18

Posts 2286
Green Mountains of VT

2 posted 2003-07-12 11:34 AM

... needing me needing you ...

         that is a real ache,
                be stronger than such.

           Time is the gravity of the soul.

                            oxoxxo

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

3 posted 2003-07-12 12:34 PM

ouch! ooooo this is sad!

Dylan
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since 2003-07-12

Posts 7

4 posted 2003-07-12 09:17 PM

you said you'd walked too far
to sit down this time

needing me, needing you

youre still everywhere
soul aching words. nice write.

gemjop
Member Elite

since 2002-11-18

Posts 2587
Pencilveinia, USA

5 posted 2003-07-12 09:35 PM

wind, i know ya can. its annoying but nice.

thanks for the replies

Wind

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since 2002-10-12

Posts 2981

6 posted 2003-07-12 10:00 PM

Well SORRY for beiing given the burden of intense powers

It's not my fault I can read your mind

If art is still inside, I feel it
-Aaron Lewes

Honeybee
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since 1999-12-26

Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA

7 posted 2003-07-12 10:02 PM

This reminds me of my ex....
this is powerful, you have some clever phrases/images, yes, I feel this.

Melissa

Intellectually I know that Canada is no better than any other country. Emotionally I KNOW that Canada is the best country in the world!

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

8 posted 2003-07-12 10:02 PM

Funny how they haunt..well not funny..it bloody sucks..

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