Open Poetry #27 |
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Tranquillity |
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anwaarhassan Member
since 2003-07-09
Posts 181Menifee, CA ![]() |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
anwaar A charming love story, Tranquillity, with a lesson, I think. Enjoyed! |
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garysgirl![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
And on many a night when the sky is clear And no sign of storm or cloud near Moonbeams frolic on gentle waves That caress the mouth of hidden caves There on the shores of deserted sands Walks a ghostly figure with outstretched hands With riotious hair flowing free… Still waiting for her love by the edge of the sea. Goodness, this is beautiful, anwaar. ![]() Hugs ![]() Ethel |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
anwaarhassan Well done, enjoyed the read. |
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anwaarhassan Member
since 2003-07-09
Posts 181Menifee, CA |
Ethel, Seymour & Martie, Appreciate your comments very much. thanks....Anwaar. |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
Anwaar: I, too, see a lesson in this. Very nice write.... |
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Wind![]()
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
anwaar, that was such a lovely image If art is still inside, I feel it |
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Midnitesun![]()
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
quote: Anwaar, I really enjoyed the imagery and rhythmic flow of words in this piece, especially the above quote. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Anwaar ~ I am fast becoming a huge fan of your writing! ![]() Captivating and very descriptive story-telling! ![]() EA |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
yes! I am so enjoying your writings! this one is so vivid, so clearly done, I can see the shore from my living room chair! a beautiful piece! [This message has been edited by passing shadows (07-12-2003 01:01 PM).] |
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anwaarhassan Member
since 2003-07-09
Posts 181Menifee, CA |
Thanks everyone...you are all very kind and inspiring...appreciate it!! Anwaar |
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