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Bayou Loving (The Sequel)
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Bayou Loving (The Sequel) |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now 
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“BAYOU LOVING ECSTASY” by Bill Charles ~~~~ This Cajun woman with desires strong within, glides effortlessly over swamps dark water, seeking her lover waiting in moonlight of night, to do what she will, for she is the tempter… In this candle moon in shadows dim with haze, she surrounds her lover with her fires passion, trees sigh in elation, as lover’s touch of skin, and the water’s part wherever they sanction… Clouds are amorphous coming together to moan, alligators slither, as possums shake in fright, ground of the earth shakes with trepidation, while the Cajun exhausts with her appetite… In dark of the mist, and in mist of the darkness, breezes are quiet, as the dawn becomes with chill, for it’s a Cajun woman in bayou loving ecstasy, in the still of the quiet, in the quiet of the still… ~~~~ |
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Bonnie j Senior Member
since 2003-06-27
Posts 1588Ohio |
What a picture you do paint of the lovely cajun woman as she roams the night for her romantic escapades. I think I'll post Ballerina of the Evening Lights you may like. See Ya Bon-Bon |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Bill...I've seen alot of bayou women being born in South Louisiana and you paint a vivid picture of one with your words.They can be rough as hell one minute and soft and sweet the next. Thanks for sharing...Paul "To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you" |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Bill....very mood intense, lovely, lovely!! |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Sometimes begging helps...  Thank you, Sir... |
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garysgirl 
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
in the still of the quiet, in the quiet of the still and there our Poet King of Romance stops...... until the next part......  |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
I have been waiting for this...Oh Bill, so good! Images, flow...everything! Patricia |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
stunning! I'll keep them in my library! |
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Ivy Rose Senior Member
since 2001-12-29
Posts 1300MA, USA |
Bill...You already know how very much I loved this poem. Excellent creation of passion and bursts of desire in your beautiful imagery. Can't say enough good about this poem. Wonderful writing!!! Spoke to the deep in me. ***Ivy Rose |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
heh heh...I knew there had to be a sequel!  ~If you haven't heard the sunset, |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Just great .... it felt as galopping in passion ...without restraints. Love, Margherita  |
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