Open Poetry #27 |
Thoughts of You in the Wee Hours of the Morning |
Skyfire
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
You once were my life You still are; always will be Even though you're gone [This message has been edited by Skyfire (07-12-2003 07:11 AM).] |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Gone...not forgotten Living on within your heart Memories remain "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
I tend to have thoughts like this in my dreams...wait a minute, in the middle of the night...yeah, thats right...James |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Rhonda, this is a really good senryu...though it is sad. I love to write these, don't you? Hugs Ethel |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
hey sf, I feel like this sometimes. Serenu or however it's spelled? lol, good write girl If art is still inside, I feel it |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Skyfire Good one, enjoyed. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
beautiful |
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Kielo Senior Member
since 2002-02-11
Posts 1109 |
*BUGS* |
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