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vlraynes
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

0 posted 2003-07-12 02:25 AM

~*If You Think...*~

If you think
my dreams are only of you...
         of us...
hand in hand-
   heart to heart
strolling life's sandy beaches...

If you think
you're always on my mind...
         in my heart...
touching me-
    holding me
safe in warm lover's embrace...

If you think
I can only be happy...
         with you...
validating-
     loving-
completing my very soul...

If you think...

then
    think again
my dear

For,
    in reality...

you
are merely
      a

            fragment

of
    my
         imagination

~vlraynes

Reposted...because Rhonda said so...LOL.

"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes
[This message has been edited by vlraynes (07-12-2003 02:28 AM).]

Skyfire

Member Elite

since 2000-12-27

Posts 3381
Riding

1 posted 2003-07-12 02:28 AM

Yeah!!!

Now I can put this in my library

I dunno what it is about this one, I think it has to do with my current mindset towards a couple certain people, but this is just an awesome poem, it has attitude and emotion in it at the same time; it's absolutely great

(isn't that a long run on sentence lol...ps> I hate dial up lol)

Skyfire owns you - Stinky Twinky

Kielo
Senior Member

since 2002-02-11

Posts 1109

2 posted 2003-07-12 02:34 AM

I'm glad Rhonda asked you to repost.

Kielo

I'll never know the cost, but all of Him is more than enough for all of me....

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

3 posted 2003-07-12 02:53 AM

slam!

bslicker

Member Elite

since 2000-12-04

Posts 2321
state of mind

4 posted 2003-07-12 04:30 PM

bump

A smile a day keeps the world in smile's.
Bernie Slicker

Patricia
Member Elite

since 2003-04-06

Posts 2160
Missouri

5 posted 2003-07-12 04:39 PM

Grinning large! This is awesome...I have a few who need to read this...but actually I don't talk to them anymore! LOL

This is a wonderful write. I can feel the power, woman!

Patricia

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

6 posted 2003-07-12 05:53 PM

Vicki:
this is awesome!

Godddd . . . I adore your strength
xxoo

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

7 posted 2003-07-12 08:55 PM

Vicky, I sure am glad that you reposted this.
I may have missed it if you hadn't. I like this.

Hugs

Ethel

MsSouthernOrchid
Member

since 2003-07-12

Posts 192

8 posted 2003-07-12 09:28 PM

I love this poem. It reflects strength in not needing another to make your life complete. It shows a strength we secretly wish we all had. Wonderful.

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

9 posted 2003-07-12 09:42 PM

That's one smart Rhonda...

and one terrific feeling of
get gone....

Well done, Vicky...

QjQ
Member Elite

since 2003-04-18

Posts 3756
U.S.A.

10 posted 2003-07-12 11:35 PM

good write,,,
enjoyed....

A voice of honesty
   is treasured
more than voices
   of flattery
      QjQ

JaiOfHeaven
Member

since 2003-04-12

Posts 207
California, Usa

11 posted 2003-07-16 03:16 AM

Imagining that someone could feel that way is sad... But it's all good. Lovely were the thoughts of holding, caring, and loving then it just crashed and gave me love pains....I like the emotion in it...thanks.

QjQ
Member Elite

since 2003-04-18

Posts 3756
U.S.A.

12 posted 2003-07-16 10:29 PM

A voice of honesty
   is treasured
more than voices
   of flattery
      QjQ

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