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ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

0 posted 2003-07-12 12:07 PM

Man,
You are the dew upon the morning rose
The moist of kiss awakened in kindest diagnose
Enfolded in your arms my heart rests to your heart
Moments weakest quicken by, replenished a la carte

Man,
You are the very refuge sought, easing quivered lips
The worth and symbol of the nectar love so softly sips
Coursed in rivers warm beneath my thinnest skin
Waves of fiery translucent yearn that I shower in

Man,
You are the pure condition of the smile I wear
The everlasting thrill within, the sun in all declare
You are the spirit of my dreams, the fuel and fire full
Man, you are within my blood, a fluid miracle

Man,
You are the whisper when I have fallen short
The mixture that will heal me, the breath my lungs import
And all the earth has given of put near to hear my songs
The one and only purpose and to whom my love belongs

Copyright Kkh 7/11/03

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

1 posted 2003-07-12 12:21 PM

ThisDiamond - you mean I'm all of those things?

BC

Martie

Moderator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

2 posted 2003-07-12 12:38 PM

TD...Woman

you are an amazing poet!

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

3 posted 2003-07-12 07:13 AM

Man,
You are the pure condition of the smile I wear
The everlasting thrill within, the sun in all declare
You are the spirit of my dreams, the fuel and fire full
Man, you are within my blood, a fluid miracle

can they ever be all this and last more than
a moment?
lovely words TD

QjQ
Member Elite

since 2003-04-18

Posts 3756
U.S.A.

4 posted 2003-07-12 11:47 PM

very good write,,,,,

A voice of honesty
   is treasured
more than voices
   of flattery
      QjQ

x8x_bigmike
Member

since 2003-07-08

Posts 130
California, USA

5 posted 2003-07-13 12:07 PM

so many great lines i couldnt choose one...

"The moist of kiss awakened in kindest diagnose"

_
I loved that line...so vivid...great job

mike

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

6 posted 2003-07-13 03:15 AM

awesome!

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