Open Poetry #27 |
Dream Lover |
Blush Member
since 2002-08-31
Posts 56Ky |
I awake... To the ticking of the clock The gentle falling rain I feel the pounding of your heart The warmth of your arms, I taste the hunger of your morning Kisses... The salty tang of loving on your skin Light nudges sleepily thru the lace curtains Dawn, Soon You will be gone~ [This message has been edited by Balladeer (07-13-2003 12:38 AM).] |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
"Dream lover where are you." Nice expression...James |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
Great write |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Lovely...just lovely. ~Hugs~ ~If you haven't heard the sunset, |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
I like this theme. Well done. Sandra |
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Snowflake From Hell Senior Member
since 2003-07-10
Posts 777My own little Icey Oblivion |
Gotta agree with everyone else =o) Another dream that will never come true just to compliment your sorrow.....Disturbed |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Blush - mornings come, mornings go, but oh the inbetween... BC |
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bslicker
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
nice write bernie A smile a day keeps the world in smile's. |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
beautiful!! |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
simply stunning very much enjoyed. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Yes, Blush...this is quite lovely! |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Blush, this is really pretty. Hugs Ethel |
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