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Open Poetry #27

Am I really okay?

Kaoru

Member Elite

since 2003-06-07

Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow

0 posted 2003-07-11 10:20 AM

The   star
   I've wished
         upon for
15   years.
Now an
   explosion in
the sky.

    Must I

remind myself
not  to      kiss for the bliss.

Glow
   my sky,
       burn
my      wish.

Wind

Member Elite

since 2002-10-12

Posts 2981

1 posted 2003-07-11 10:22 AM

I love the style of your words. I'm having trouble thinking of things to say. I'd say more..but you know

If art is still inside, I feel it
-Aaron Lewes

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

2 posted 2003-07-11 01:44 PM

beautiful

Kahlil
Senior Member

since 2003-04-12

Posts 1881

3 posted 2003-07-11 02:01 PM

Kaoru: the explosion in the sky could become stardust over your ocean....

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

4 posted 2003-07-11 02:25 PM

I would love to echo Kahlil's reply!

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