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Transference |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Transference Within the shadows of a goal Lies the doorway to the soul Beyond the seven veils of view Rests the key to its undo Somewhere in the sift of rhyme Lays its essence and its time Within the winding of your sail Will the passage come to bale There is no tender way to find The occult spirit of your mind It lies within eternity For that’s how long forever be. Within the spinning of the wheel Passing on from real to real Lies the strange of ever change And the ever of its range And if, I clad another veil Just add it to your top most sail. |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
and a very good friday morning to you; you soar and sail with the spirit of a bird in flight over the ocean blue |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
inkedgoddess Good morning and thank you. |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Sy, I hope you only need a light air sail.. believe in what your heart feels... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
scorpio Can't say for sure. LOL |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
What an uplifting morning write Sy! Such a wonderful way to start my day! Have a great weekend love. ~Morning hugs & tea, Nancy~ ~If you haven't heard the sunset, |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Nancy, Thank you dear be right there for tea.  |
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Good morning dear Seymour. Yet another wonderful write to ponder and savour. I won't be here for a few days as I am leaving on a short jaunt with my hubby to-morrow. I am sure that your morning snacks with tea will be taken care of !! As for to-day...I have a silver platter of sweet treats for thee! Have a great weekend and I shall return hugs, Chris  [This message has been edited by Nightshade (07-11-2003 10:09 AM).] |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
 !!! !!! !!!You've done it again, Mr. T.! I'd have to quote the whole poem to show you all the lines I loved!!!  I hope that you can bring Randy with you the next time around!  Luvsya both! EA |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Earth Angel Randy is coming up soon, Loveya.  |
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anwaarhassan Member
since 2003-07-09
Posts 181Menifee, CA |
Beautiful write...Your rhyming has a certain melody to it...very impressive. Anwaar. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Anwaar, Thank you for the read and reply. |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Sy...once again, your rhymes have woven a smile onto my face.  Love this, my friend. "it is better to be a part of beauty |
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JaiOfHeaven Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 207California, Usa |
Smooth collection of rhyme. Liked it alot. Whenever you get this.. checkout my post "Jo" I experimented a lil on it. Jai |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
vlraynes It's always a pleasure to have you comment. Thank you dear,  Jai Thank you for the read and I will. |
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