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brian sites
Senior Member

since 2002-06-25

Posts 1475
usa

0 posted 2003-07-11 03:30 AM

trace a scar on me
          your words dig poetry
furrows
     in earthen brows
planting carets
       for facet-hounds

I dig you
my hot pressured one

I can't wear you on a finger
    set and bound

I will regard you
              raw
                      you
              call
yourself           unpolished
   yet
you
      spingiddy
                    and blind

like a blushing
                         bride

[This message has been edited by brian sites (07-11-2003 03:35 AM).]

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

1 posted 2003-07-11 03:33 AM

cool!

vlraynes
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

2 posted 2003-07-11 03:38 AM

"I will regard you
              raw
                      you
              call
yourself           unpolished
   yet
you
      spingiddy
                    and blind

like a blushing
                         bride"

Smiling at this...   Love it, Brian.
Hugs,
~Vicky
"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

3 posted 2003-07-11 03:46 AM

because YOU know.

spingiddy, indeed.

smiling here.

madviking

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

4 posted 2003-07-11 04:18 AM

Smiling at this Bri
you guys make me smile . . .
xxoo

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

5 posted 2003-07-11 06:38 AM

Who better
than a poet
to spingiddy?

wranx
Member Elite

since 2002-06-07

Posts 3689
Moved from a shack to a barn

6 posted 2003-07-17 10:47 AM

A spingdiddy cast about with recklessness.

Back to the top with ya!

Martie

Moderator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

7 posted 2003-07-17 10:59 AM

Wonderful!

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

8 posted 2003-07-17 11:06 AM

Brian, I like this...but what is  "spingiddy"
....or as Ed says....."spingdiddy". LOL
Whatever it is, I love that word. LOL
spingiddy...spingiddy..spingiddy

Now, say this one three times fast.......
spingdiddy...spingdiddy...spingdiddy

I'm sorry, I just think that's so cute!!
And I love the form you wrote this in, too.

Hugs

Ethel

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