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Blush Member
since 2002-08-31
Posts 56Ky |
 Longing, wanting, needing I see you in my dreams You are always out of reach... I run I jump You are always eluding me... I always seem To fall behind come up short I want to be with you your hand out of reach... I want to touch the stars And dream of catching you You holding me As we wrap our arms Round one another... I would give you All I have To be held in your arms Never let me go But you are always out of reach.... [This message has been edited by Balladeer (07-13-2003 12:03 AM).] |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Blush, this is a beautiful love poem.  Hugs  Ethel |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Beautifully done..... .......but I have one question -- any chance that this can be bottled, or maybe packaged as a aerosol......just wondering.... ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
been there, done it...good write |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
know this feeling...feeling it now! thanks for the thoughts!~ ARH |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Molly - God this is amazing! I missed your entrance Welcome to PIP! This is just raw xxoo |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Wonderful write! Love the format as well. ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~If you haven't heard the sunset, |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
I can relate ..... he fills my mind completely , love him so much , but know I will never be able to touch Hope |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Wonderful. I love the last line....as you can see by what just happens to be under my pen name..lol. hugs, Chris  "Said you'd give me light... |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I know this well... and you've written it beautifully! *S* |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
You captured that sort of dream perfectly!  EA |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
a very beautiful poem gifted from your heart. |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
 [This message has been edited by Balladeer (07-13-2003 12:17 AM).] |
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x8x_bigmike Member
since 2003-07-08
Posts 130California, USA |
Your last three lines work very well...do you think the pic focuses the reader on your message or could it be possible that the pic restrics the poem from being bigger. I dont know the answer...I thought it was awesome either way...great write Mike |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Excellent emote....I'm living this right now, he's married, long story. But, I relate and your presentation is great. Melissa~ Intellectually I know that Canada is no better than any other country. Emotionally I KNOW that Canada is the best country in the world! |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
this was georgous! |
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