Open Poetry #27 |
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Nightfall - for Vicky |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart ![]() |
Crickets chirp in dark Katydids slip-sing their song Babies fall asleep ![]() |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
short and sweet ![]() |
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Snowflake From Hell Senior Member
since 2003-07-10
Posts 777My own little Icey Oblivion |
How is it that the short ones are always the best yet they say so little but say so much at the same time Another dream that will never come true just to compliment your sorrow.....Disturbed |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Lovely...like a lullabye. ~Hugs~ ~If you haven't heard the sunset, |
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Nightshade![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Awww...how sweet Karilea! hugs, Chris ![]() "Said you'd give me light... |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Serene ![]() enjoyed m'friend ![]() Maree. fate is not just |
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Poe_Pot_Pie Member
since 2003-06-01
Posts 107Canada |
Now that was short. I like it! Calming, relaxing and perfect! keep up the good writing! |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Well, lookie there...it's a poem for me...and I love it. ![]() Thank you, my friend, for for the gentle and calming thoughts...I needed that. Hugs, ![]() ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truly met the poet. ~vlraynes [This message has been edited by vlraynes (07-10-2003 10:58 PM).] |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
A lovely little gift for our Ms Vicky! ![]() Luvs 'n hugs to you both! Linda |
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Tim Senior Member
since 1999-06-08
Posts 1794 |
enjoyed the poem, but can we send our crickets up I-35? |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
Oh K...this is beautiful. You work magic with these verses. Patricia |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
![]() ![]() "it is better to be a part of beauty |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Just because I love to see Vicky smile~ ![]() Lovely little write, Karilea~ ![]() *Huglets* Psst ... I swiped the graphic~ ![]() ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
Crickets chirp in dark Katydids slip-sing their song Babies fall asleep silence now surrounds white lace curtains filled with moon baby at my breast |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Beautiful! Eric |
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garysgirl![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Karilea, what a sweet gift for our Vicky. Just beautiful. ![]() Hugs ![]() Ethel |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Beautiful Karilea and a lovely sentiment for Vicki made me smile much needed xxoo |
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angelblueyes Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148Oklahoma |
Shot, sweet, and excellent is the write. angelblueyes |
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