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Open Poetry #27

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Kaoru

Member Elite

since 2003-06-07

Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow

0 posted 2003-07-15 03:00 AM

Imbalance,
cresendo
wind song.

Radiate,

light shed through

windowpane.

Misguided stars

often do grant

wishes..

Corrupt,
diluted sky.

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

1 posted 2003-07-15 03:01 AM

what a neat thought process...good lines

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

2 posted 2003-07-15 06:54 AM

sometimes the sky finds me and sometimes i find it.......its a mixed bag, aint it?

real interesting thoughts here

Temptress

Moderator

Member Rara Avis

since 1999-06-15

Posts 7136
Mobile, AL

3 posted 2003-07-15 12:04 PM

I like this style..it reminds me of another of my favorite poets here.

I'm not sure I've read very much of your work before. Bad me...enjoyed...

Late at night you'll come crawling back
Just to steal a piece of me

"Default"

JaiOfHeaven
Member

since 2003-04-12

Posts 207
California, Usa

4 posted 2003-07-16 02:52 AM

stop..go...stop..go. When going...stop and go. It seemed this way..., but maybe only to me. It was cold ... yet stil mysterious.

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