Open Poetry #27 |
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The Unmatched Kiss |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio ![]() |
Moon colored leaves spin with illusions autumn ghosts swim in golden showers, they are animation for the still life and break the spell of summer sedation. They come along in premature deliverey or perhaps in seasons that hid behind the forest deep, until in hesitation my eyes - they do acknowledge, that none is ever quite the way it seems. As dreamless men that sit behind a desk job, achieve fulfillment spouting their manure, they dress up in a poet's fine attire and spoonfeed hollow hope to hungry housewives. But still I let illusions in to filter, if only capturing some momentary bliss, as comfort sought for storms that i have gathered, rarely touching me likeThe Rainbow's unmatched kiss [This message has been edited by inkedgoddess (07-11-2003 07:54 AM).] |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
inkedgoddess - an unmatched kiss would never come from you... BC |
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garysgirl![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
But still I let illusions in to filter, if only capturing a momentary dream, seeking comfort in the storms i've gathered, thou barely touching like The Rainbow's unmatched kiss Michele, this is a beautiful poem. I really do like it. ![]() Hugs ![]() Ethel |
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Blush Member
since 2002-08-31
Posts 56Ky |
Nicely done I liked this one I just posted my first one here today Patchwork Quilts Hope to see you drop by ![]() Susan~ |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Beautifully expressed, Michele. I enjoyed this. ![]() Hugs, ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Michele: God . . . this is . . AMEN As dreamless men that sit behind a desk job, achieve fulfillment spouting their manure, they dress up in a poet's fine attire and spoonfeed hollow hope to hungry housewives. This is brilliant . . . Yes . . . I must find my rainbow again too *wink* xxoo |
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ambrish Member
since 2003-03-27
Posts 257India |
a very beautifull poem indeed |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
Bill, yes, you are quite perceptive....... Ethel, thanks for all the words of support blush, hello and welcome here, it is quite a magical place to be, youll laugh, youll cry and youll find something here each blessed day viraynes, a pleasure to see you sue, glad you could find something here ; are we worth anything but the pure joy a rainbow brings? ambrish, welcome too to this lovely place of blue |
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Cpat Hair![]()
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
(chuckling).... pointed...and well said... nicely done |
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bslicker![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
![]() bernie A smile a day keeps the world in smile's. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Good job here, Michele.... |
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Wind![]()
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
This is a good one ![]() If art is still inside, I feel it |
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Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA |
great poem - wow it really says so much - will be readingit again - thanks Paul |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
cpat..glad i could evoke a chuckle, maybe next time a guffaw....... bernie........first times a charm sunshine....thank you, and thanks again wind...thanks girl paul.....thank you for stopping in |
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catalinamoon![]()
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Very well done, and thought provoking. Sandra |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Michele: indeed indeed xxoo |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
nicely done,,, enjoyed.... A voice of honesty |
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dreambuilder Member
since 2003-03-23
Posts 319caddyshack |
what an amazing write these lines especially caught me: As dreamless men that sit behind a desk job, achieve fulfillment spouting their manure, they dress up in a poet's fine attire and spoonfeed hollow hope to hungry housewives. mice pretending to be Men I'll bet you make them tuck tail & scurry off - may you be blessed by a true Man - as a Lady should be |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
thanks Sandra, good to see u........ Sue, thanks for the bump...... dreamer...glad u liked- and could appreciate the lines you highlighted; yes, the mice, the mice......squeak by lady? thank you.....but this chick has too much "moxie" to curtsie and smile once her claws come out......lol |
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