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Aisle 4
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Aisle 4 |
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Poe_Pot_Pie Member
since 2003-06-01
Posts 107Canada |
In The Great Canadian SuperStore, On Main St, across from the deli, Is Aisle 4. On the shelves are paper towels and tissue paper. On the ground is a'Caution, Wet Floor' sign. The tiled floor is wet. The woman is looking for Scotts. Her child wishes to go back to Aisle 3(The Candy Aisle). I, the poet, just knocked some no name toilet paper on the floor. A voice from the sky announces 'Clean up in Aisle 4'. Soon, roller-skating clerks will rescues us all. All under the sign, say "Aisle 4". |
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Jennis#1 Member
since 2003-07-08
Posts 112IL, Usa |
Wow.  wonderful poem. It is great. I hope read more of your work. Keep on writting. |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
Very good, Poe. Care to take my kids to the grocery? Frightening experience to say the least. Smiling large at you. This is great! Patricia |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
I enjoy reading little snippets of life like in this poem!  Warm hugs, EA |
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Saunni Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777West Virginia |
So full of real life  Wonderful! Sauni:)The Only Time I See The Sun Is When I'm Within That Vanilla Breeze.The Only Time I'm One With The Sun Is When He Shelters Me From The Rain. L.S |
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Blush Member
since 2002-08-31
Posts 56Ky |
Nicely done LOL and for shame you didn't even see what brand of Mr> Whipple's toilet paper you knocked down Very unique this was Thanks for the read and warm welcome Susan~ |
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