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Breaking Up is Hard to Do
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Breaking Up is Hard to Do |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow 
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You're so gloom and doom, little storm cloud hovering above your head.. "Oh, woe.. Woe is me". Please! Smile, darling, I hate it when you're not happy. I'm hiding deep inside the effect of it all. Tonight, I'll beg myself to keep inside that room - The spare bedroom where we kept all the worthless junk. A mighty heap we'd collected. Stare at the stars through a dusty window, where I spilled red paint.. I run my fingers over the drops that had dried their mark upon the sill.. And still, I hadn't cried, bottled up..explosive love.. Dare I ask, but do your arms miss me? Sealed up this, like a kiss on lips that vanish.. As I say, Breaking up is hard to do, I'm happy that I did it with you. My favorite mistake, you know I still linger upon that window sill.. |
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Jennis#1 Member
since 2003-07-08
Posts 112IL, Usa |
 Wow. This poem blew me away.I hope to read more of your work. keep on posting. You have real talanet. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Yes, it is hard, unless your totally disgusted with them...and then its easier...James |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Much enjoyed the read... Great imagery.. ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~If you haven't heard the sunset, |
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Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA |
great poetry - powerful images and evokes strrong feelings - loved it - Paul |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
Thats beautiful. It reminds me of a song..I heard somewhere"breakin up is haurd to do" somebody stop me  If art is still inside, I feel it |
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