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Into the sighing
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Into the sighing |
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Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA 
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Into the sighing Randomness walks holding my hand Testing lies in a spiraling land Wandered we - looking for free No one saw - did love thaw Interlaced thoughts and feelings are screaming Obsolete timing and screening are beaming Leftover thoughts wield too much power Nuzzling bees caress the flower Timelessness careens over paused living None knew but were we giving Surrounded hearts seek And we lost and found But did we ever see – did we… [This message has been edited by Goodknight (07-10-2003 03:11 PM).] |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
WOW! Wonderful write Paul.. You leave the reader with plenty to think about here... I enjoy that. Hope your birthday has been a great one so far! ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~If you haven't heard the sunset, |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Paul "And we lost and found But did we ever see – did we…" Good question...To really see is not alway easy...things slip by because we travel so fast. What an interesting poem...loved it! |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Hi Paul Good to read you again, this is fascinating. Sandra |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Surrounded hearts seek And we lost and found But did we ever see – did we… It's hard to choose the best among so many beautifully conceived lines...but these three are absolutely classic.... Well done, sir -- well done. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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